A Blinded Down Fall

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jun 22, 2005


Too happy to see a blind down fall,
The girl, she never really began to see.
With her arms opened Heaven ward to all,
This girl was all she ever wanted to be.
She had a fragile heart yet never crushed,
An opened back yet never stabbed
She soon would learn everything would be hush, hush
That nothing was all that true glam and fab.
See, she did not understand,
How easily he left her hand,
Her world seemed to halt;
How was this all her fault?
With new eyes,
To an ugly fresh new world,
Even if the hurt has yet to dry,
For her heart was throughly hurled.
'Why me, what have I done to deserve this?
I miss his kiss;
Oh why oh why me?
I had all I would ever need...'
She began to cry,
A long sorrowful cry,
She had lost the want,
The care and need,
How could God be so blunt,
Had taken no heed?
Everything came apart,
And now she resides in a black soul,
They had taken her heart,
As if placed in a bowl.
Her life had died,
One by one,
Crushed to hide,
Soon to be done.
Now that she sees her blinded down fall,
She can fully see,
She once had it all,
But is nothing to be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Language**

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Truth be told, i dont really love this one, it kind of is annoying(no offense). but alot of the lines were way to long, or short, depending, maybe im reading it wrong but thats my opinion,

    the story was good, along with some of the anguage, but i think that could use improvement as well.

    4|5

    «Tiny Heart»

  • 17 years ago

    by Suchapoetictradgedy

    Amazingly written :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    Awesomw poem....

  • 18 years ago

    by Sixpence None The Richer

    *wipes eye* So sad hunny!!! Im sorry :( I hope you feel better soon and everything turns out for you..Really I do. This is awesome but o so sad..Excellent work though. Nice job *thumbs up, hugs you* Love SNTR.