Comments : Under The Bridge

  • 12 years ago

    by Iyla

    GRRRR!! i want to know wut happens!!! >< AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! it's so good tho. and thank you so much for your comment... it really means alot, just to know that i do have friends that care

    great poem as always!!
    5/5
    Truley,
    -Kit

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor

    WOW! xtalking sperm clap and roar in the crowdx !!!! woo!! i love this poem so friggin much! it's amazing! really great! ...hmm...what should i think should happen to the girl...i think that by some strange way she'll live even though she TRIES to kill herself! well there's my input! well keep it up! the hairy monkey nuts love you so much!

    -BIG HAIRY MONKEY NUTS!

    Love ya, Taylor

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Wow...to kill...or not to kill....hmm...*weighs with hands* Which sounds more fun? As a newly bitten vampire, I'd have to say TO KILL, but as a leader of the Meatball Hoagie Club..>I'd have to say NOT TO KILL! So, this one puzzles me, lol!!!!!!

    Miss ya mah darling Shaggers!!!!!!! I've been gone so long, and I continue to be gone!
    I'm soo sorry...

    LOVE TO THE MEATBALL HOAGIE IN YOU!!

    ~Sierra

    ___Meatball Hoagie#2___

  • 12 years ago

    by jescelle

    absolutly stunning poem, andrea you have such a way with words its not even funny! gurl, i love you and i hope your doing good! come read my poems when you get the chance! i miss you! xoxoxxoxoxooxoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Great poem Andrea! It was so great. A great description and much emotion. I loved it! Can't wait to find out what happens to the girl. Love you! <3

    ~Krissy

    *hugs*

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    Amazing poem, been looking forward to another master piece from you, well done it was fantastic everything clicked into place and the flow was perfect.. keep up the great work and well done

    take care

    katie!

    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    wow...im speechless... you're so incredibly talented. keep up the amazing work!!!
    -xXx-

  • 12 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    i hope she doesn't die it wouldn't be fair... well written poem though it's very scary!

  • 12 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    this was a wonderful poem
    great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Wow. This is the best poem I have read in a long time on this site. It took my breath away by it's sadness. 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    absolutely wonderful, I really enjoyed this poem, and I liked the way you ended it with a question. Maybe there will be a sequel? Either way excellent. Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    I really thought your poem was amazing, and beautifully written. The one thing you need to decide, is if someone, anyone, loves or cares about her. If someone does, I think they should help her to save her own life, but if no one comes along...you know the rest. Then again, I like the way the poem is now, left hanging.

    Megan

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    another well written dark poem 5

  • 12 years ago

    by joe

    I'm goin to go with pro-life on this one.
    ill give my opinion on the poem when i have more time, till then stay curious
    -Allen

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    well if you do decide she lives than you would have to have someone realize the hurt shes been through and be with her every step of the way to show her that someone does care. then it will show how people need others to survive and that this girl was lucky enough to get just that near her almost end.

    if you decide that she should die, then it should show how society cares to much about there busy days to stop and realize the help she needs. the world lately seems to revolve around money and what they are going to buy next or what they are going to spend thier money on, it seems like people seem to care more about themself than others. so maybe if she dies it can be a wake up call to those who would have just passed her by, a wake up call to those who would have figured "O someone else can deal with her" the message to this poem is that you can make a difference so stop letting those chance pass you by!

    ~but thats just my opinion, and maybe you didn't want my answer to this. you made a wonderful poem and it is a delight to see new ones from you! this poem once you decide her fate can sure show a lot of meaning and a strong message! tell me once you decide so i can read to see what you thought was the best finish for her!~

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 12 years ago

    by LostANDConfused

    Great Poem. I don't think she should die. In many poems the people just die and some freak miracle should keep them all alive. So let some freak miracle happen to her and let her live.
    Jenn.

  • 12 years ago

    by LindaPham

    great poem you express the feelings very well..... it's a nice poem i liked it
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I'm am really starting to enjoy reading your poems...you have such talent! and your only 16? you've come far! another awsum poem
    luv em

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow this is really good.. I Love the rhyme scheme that you used and the way that you ended it with a question.. very creative. You did a great job on this.. I loved it!