Comments : Every soldier comes back changed...(long, but good.)

  • 12 years ago

    by kate

    Wow excellent and really really well written seriously i really love it so amazing,5/5 keep writting

  • 12 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow, 5 stars for this one...!! hugs

  • 12 years ago

    by tabithaa

    lewis....actually, i wasnt even thinking about that o_O!!!

  • wow i really liked it. your a great writer
    5/5
    =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachele

    :O:O:O a big impact was givin with this message so true you cant go 2 war and come bak the same 5/5 nice worl:)

  • 12 years ago

    by heartofcold

    hay i loved your poem i hope don't mind but i printed it out and have it on my wall along with the other great poems i've found

  • 12 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    pretty good. I liked the last few lines best. But overall really good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by NobodysxFool

    Wow. That poem made me cry. Very very very good! If you could rate more than 5 I would! 5/5...awesome!

  • 12 years ago

    by undying blusher

    incredible poem. well done. i haven't read anything really on this subject...excellent job. :)

    Thanks again for reading...

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Wow, awesome poem ... made me think about it . I do not think I jhave read anything about this before ...really great job .
    April

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    that was so sad.... 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by None

    wow....I love to write about war, not that I know about it first hand,but it is amazing to think of all the things soldiers go through,that no one but them knows about...

  • 12 years ago

    by =)~ BJ ~(=

    OMG that was awesome. it really hit home with me tho. my husband is overseas right now. and im scared to death of how he'll be changed when he comes home. do u mind if i print this out and show this to mine and his family. they would love to read it.

  • 12 years ago

    by tabithaa

    no...you can print it out I don't mind

  • 12 years ago

    by brittany

    great poem loved it
    <3brittany<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Well, I'd say pretty amazing. There were just a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I'd just suggest you'd spell check.

    I love how he went from insisting there'd be no regrets to admitting she was right. But once you've signed that it's. An awesome way to end it too, I love that he SURVIVED. Too many soldier poems on here end up with a dead soldier. Success story! I loved it! It is sad...but they sure are appreciated!

    Nicely done!! 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    i hope you stay inspired this was really good

  • 12 years ago

    by ashley

    another excellent piece, wow, you are an awesome writer... great work another 5

  • 12 years ago

    by terra

    That was an amazing poem and it brought tears to my eyes. My husband is in the Marine Corps, fortunately enough home with me. so while reading this poem of yours I put my self in those shoes.
    And thank you for rating and commenting on my poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by lee

    well, even though its not a true story, and ur not a guy...it was really good. i lkd it. what inspired you to write it?? 5/5.