OMG that was awesome. it really hit home with me tho. my husband is overseas right now. and im scared to death of how he'll be changed when he comes home. do u mind if i print this out and show this to mine and his family. they would love to read it.
Well, I'd say pretty amazing. There were just a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I'd just suggest you'd spell check.
I love how he went from insisting there'd be no regrets to admitting she was right. But once you've signed that it's. An awesome way to end it too, I love that he SURVIVED. Too many soldier poems on here end up with a dead soldier. Success story! I loved it! It is sad...but they sure are appreciated!
That was an amazing poem and it brought tears to my eyes. My husband is in the Marine Corps, fortunately enough home with me. so while reading this poem of yours I put my self in those shoes.
And thank you for rating and commenting on my poem.