what a beautiful beautiful poem, you should be proud.
I saw your comment on Xkt ShellyXs poem and thought I'd check out some of your stuff and I'm impressed
I can totally relate to the feeling of wanting someone to know you love them if you were dying, if that makes sense
anyways, check out some of my stuff if you like
Beautiful poem,.. Every stanza flowed so well and I loved the rhyme scheme. You are so talented and such a cutie cuz all your poems manage to do with someone you love.
be talking to you soon:D