My Watery Grave

by Ashleigh Skye   Jul 20, 2005


I actually thought,
of ending it all,
of letting the cool water,
swallow me whole.

Of counting to ten,
and taking the dive,
deep under the water,
no chance of being revived.

Of a watery grave,
below the lake's shiny top,
where I could swim with the fishes,
and my pain would stop.

No one here cares,
if I live or die,
so by ending it all,
I suppress another cry.

And my pain will stop,
when my body turns grey,
when I've numbed my soul,
for more than a day.

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based on something I felt a few days ago.. if it hadn't have been for my family I would have given into the waters tug but for now at least I have to stay strong.

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  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    my ex best frend tried to drown me...it felt good i wish she did drown me..umm yer i may sound like a hypocrit but u deserve to live...5/5

    take it easy hunni

    -angel-

  • 18 years ago

    by if i told it wouldnt be a secret

    i hope u fell better cuz that was an awesome poem greta skills u have keep up the excellent work

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    EXCELLENT TITLE!! That fits perfectly! ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Excellent! I love the anxiety in it! I was in a hurry to get to the bottom of it to see how it would end. It kept my interest and was very emotional.

    The only thing I'll say to you is...an untitled poem is a LAZY poem. :) Something to think about.

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    how sad! great twist on the topic of suiside. not many can write about it in a way that is almost indirect! nicely done.

    ~Breeze

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