by Esther   Jul 25, 2005

Kill the speed,
You do not need,
Save a child,
It'll be worth while,

Don't kill the speed,
Then you will succeed,
To dig a grave,
You could have saved

The grave you dig,
Will not forgive,
It would be your mistake
It would be too late!


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  • 9 years ago

    by NiQk

    Spectacular poem! one of my favoerites! You are definately becoming a favorite! :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Narphangu

    I like the idea, and you have some pretty freaking awesome phrases in there, so good job!

    My suggestion, should you choose to want one ;) , would be this:

    Try adding a little bit more description, cause it's a bit hard to follow.

  • 11 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. it's not quite as good as your other one. But I like how it circulates, I don't think thats the right word, but I'm sure you get my point. You've great rhyming abilities. You seem to rhyme without killing your poem, unlike me.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, I thought it was full of meaning yet straight to the point.

  • 11 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Excellent. Short, punchy and to the point. I loved everything about this poem - your word choice was exemplary. I could not agree more with the message. Well done. 5/5

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