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by Lisa Jul 29, 2005
Sadness, depression /
What if he's not that one?
Am I making a mistake?
Sometimes I wonder if I love him
My crap is what he takes
Sometimes I get so angry
Like I could rip off his head
I wouldn't feel sad about it
Until he fell down dead
Is that an uncommon feeling?
I'm always asking myself
Together for a year now
Is there a problem with my health?
I've told him that I love him
And each time I feel it's true
But then he says something that hurts me
And I want to yell "we're through"
It seems like we're just pushing buttons
Then trying to get past
The argument where we said such things
This relationship might not last
I guess what I'm trying to say is
Does he love me so?
Do I really care for him?
Or is it time for us to go
All this time I thought for sure
That he was absolutely the one
But what about when he kisses me
All I feel is tongue
Isn't this supposed to feel different?
Special in no other way
Isn't this love supposed to grow?
Get bigger every day?
These are the questions I ask myself
As he calls me to say Hello
What if he's not the one?
When is the time to let go?
you expressed your emotion well in this one. great job.
great poem really heart felt!!!!! i love it!!!
luv RaNdOmGaL xxx
good poem. full of emotion and saddness. i liked it alot
nice feeling the poem envokes.. u put out ur feelings of confusion in a gud way, and the rhyme was gud..
wen he's the one, u'll just noe.. no need to wonder.. ;)
keep goin.. and stop wonderin too much (lol)
This is really good. I think it's how a lot of people think about relationships.
I know that's how I feel. Your writing technique is great. And rhyming skills are awesome too.