i love this poem..it really shows feelin and kinda realates to what im goin through but not really... good job...keep writing....ur awesome at it...
~hugs~N~Kisses~
~*!*Kenya Dawn*!*~

wow that is really deep and very good

woa..... thats so sweet! Great poem

wow that was AMAZING! that girl should DEF give u a chance! u are an amazing person, and she should be very proud to have you want her. whoever she is). fransisco, u have an awesome gift. you are so good at writing, words cant describe it. you should consider publishing your poems into a book. i know id buy it! it was beautiful. all your poems are.
lia jnell
PS: to everyone out there, here is a GR8 writer! read all of his poems! they make me almost and sometimes cry with emotion!!!)

wow really great poem ur a great writer...well take care

oh so romantic i cant belive it so CUTE omg so so so cute lol i loved it hope u can check out my poems sometime thanxz :)

Excellant! I loved it! *5*
~Never Give Up

excellent poem.keep up the good work

really nice poem!keep up the good job!

this is a beautiful poem....i really loved it...5/5...keep in touch i would love to talk to you more

AWESOME

love it I can relate and keep up the good work 5/5

very cute poem:) some of your bests, keep it up!
weeping wolf

wow exellent poem, and it seems evry1 loves it aswell as me! well done keep up the good work, i'm feeling lyk that right now so ur nt the onbli 1 dnt wurry! cya
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hey i loved it. i relly like the emotions u put into this poem. its relly great. 5/5 yea .. if only he knew also.. but i have lerned to accept the fact that "everythign happens for a reason"... ok b4 i start crying gain.. i jstu wnted to say dat this poem is awesome.. u have talent. plz comment on some of mine also... tc

thats exactly what im going through. it was a very good poem! keep writing!

i loved it great read i reali reali lyked keep it up
*~*emma*~*xoxoxox

very expressive poem you have tallent

I really enjoyed reading this poem and i think that if most guys or girls knew about how much another person loves them then they would not always have to get their heart broken just to find that special person.

thats g-8 keep up the good work and if a guy told me his true feelings i would so give him a chance i a heart beat...