Will you be my Valentine?(part two)

by Switchblade89   Aug 11, 2005

I know it's kind of early to be putting this one in,but I just wanted to see what you all thought about it.

It's my second time asking you this question,
and most people tell me that all of this is obsession,
but for at least one day I want you to be mine,
so will you please be my Valentine?

I know you more than I did the year before,
but for this one day I want to know you more,
I want one day where everything I do,
the rose,the card and candy all for you,

One day where your true beauty shows,
beauty that blossoms as you grow older,
the kind of beauty that no one but me knows,
cause true beauty is in the eyes of the beholder,
now let me have a chance to give you this rose,
and talk while your head rests on my shoulder,

I hope this poem written by this boy,
makes you smile and blush with joy,
I also hope you say yes to the following line,
Will you be my Valentine?


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Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Pretty...it's so beautiful...i don't think any girl would reject you for a poem so sweet like this...the girl who does...must be blind...

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wooow gd poem dude

    keep it up

    sarah x x x

  • 13 years ago

    by David Paul

    Hey it was pretty good. Better than the last one. Good job. Never give up. kilman

  • 13 years ago

    by Fighter

    Beautiful!!! keep up the great work!

  • 13 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hm, i liked this one too. It had a sort of uniqueness. It was very well written, and i loved how you said what will be happening and then you ask over again with such passion for that girl to be your Valentine. I hope she says yes, if she is real.