Trigger Tragedy (Huitain)

by †JustAri†   Aug 23, 2005


Bullets whispering in their ears
They are young ones, they do not know
Very close is the end of years
Mother left home awhile ago
Father's in the basement below
A pull of the trigger ended
Little lives gone makes hearts to sew
Because guns were unattended

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

*If you have little ones in a household where there is also a gun (or any weapon, for that matter), either keep it where they cannot find it or get rid of it. Simple as that. No more children's lives should be stolen all because of an accident that could've been well prevented.

Huitain:
A Spanish poetry form, it revolves around the number 8 - there are 8 lines to the poem, with 8 syllables per line. The rhyming scheme is ABABBCBC

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    The message is powerful and it reminds me of a scene in the movie 6 sence. good job, you have better but this one is still good and creative.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 12 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow. Very nice ariana. you remind me of another poet that was on this site once. she was just so full of raw talent at a young age, it was just unfortuante she never came back. i hope you stay with us :)
    -A

  • 12 years ago

    by Enya

    4/4. I like ur poem. Please check out some of mine!!!