Comments : False Hope

  • 12 years ago

    by dandy

    Alright....I don't even know how to put this.....This is probably one the most, if not the most creative love poem I've read on here. Im envious! How do you come up with such great lines? "I'm sure Sleeping Beauty is wide awake now"....That's my favorite stanza. You've outdone yourself; Awesome, awesome job! Thanks again for commenting!

    ~dandy~

  • 12 years ago

    by Void

    Wow, big words, sentences with feeling, story and explanation... perfect! that was more than excellent!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda,
    This was truly one of the best poems I've read in a while. Your wording, the flow, just everything about this one...superb...beautiful...

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WHOA! Amanda this honestly just blew me away. I loved every line as you so creatively described a broken heart. I love how you incorporated fairy tails in this while showing them in a different light. It flowed wonderfully and was so emotional. This is one of the best poems I've ever read within this site. Absolutely amazing. If this doesn't win a spot in the weekly contest I'll petition a riot...LMAO Just an amazing write from you Miss Bee. I miss chatting with you in the forums...and unfortunately haven't read much of your poetry lately...but I will be showing my name a little more often.

    Again I loved this...excellent write!!! :) Take care and do keep in touch...

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    WOW, you totally expressed yourself in this one. The words you've used are beautiful, the flow is excellent. Its sad, touching and very powerful..... this is one of the best poems I've ever read. Wonderful write.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 12 years ago

    by M J U

    Amanda...glad to see you are back in action and doing as well as ever. I changed my info to my initials to track my work but you are still my all time favorite. Keep up the excellent work. Matt

  • 12 years ago

    by HansRik

    Amanda, my friend, this is truly a wonderful piece of art. It is beautifully structured and worded. The imagery is fantastic, and the feelings between the words are evident. Excellent, well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Amanda ...
    Your words flow so freely .... powerful yet sad and touching to the heart ...

    A wonderful poem ..full of emotion

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Thats beautiful and just so sad! Great ideas here and I love how you described and explored them. Sorry I can find no constructive critisim here other than using punctuation to mark out what your saying so you can display your emotions easier. Great job with beautiful expression!

  • 11 years ago

    by Atomic

    My comment was with the poetry comment and I meant each and every word.

    "This poem have given us all a look at what love really is and our ignorance that it’ll never end. Well done M’Dear. I really enjoyed."

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 11 years ago

    by skyfox

    I am glad I decided to read more of your work. What a brilliantly innovative piece. Just loved it and totally enjoyed the read. Thankyou for sharing

  • 11 years ago

    by Falling Up

    O my god... i love this poem... its amazing how u can create such a mood as this , make it flow, and rhyme! wow you are an amazing poet.... i really enjoyed this poem... and it is so very true... its all so stereotypical these days.... ugh.. keep up the good work... i loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I can so relate to this(only too well).The love, the loss, the need and wanting, the pain, and yes hope can be a double edged sword, well, false hope anyway(which is a horrible limbo to be trapped in, believe me I know).So sad and beautiful yet ending with a bit of determination and a trace of true hope.Excellently written,very touching.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    Great job with this poem. It has a great rhyme shceme and imagery that draws the reader in. Great work on the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Unbroken heart

    Wow it's really really good