Alright....I don't even know how to put this.....This is probably one the most, if not the most creative love poem I've read on here. Im envious! How do you come up with such great lines? "I'm sure Sleeping Beauty is wide awake now"....That's my favorite stanza. You've outdone yourself; Awesome, awesome job! Thanks again for commenting!
WHOA! Amanda this honestly just blew me away. I loved every line as you so creatively described a broken heart. I love how you incorporated fairy tails in this while showing them in a different light. It flowed wonderfully and was so emotional. This is one of the best poems I've ever read within this site. Absolutely amazing. If this doesn't win a spot in the weekly contest I'll petition a riot...LMAO Just an amazing write from you Miss Bee. I miss chatting with you in the forums...and unfortunately haven't read much of your poetry lately...but I will be showing my name a little more often.
Again I loved this...excellent write!!! :) Take care and do keep in touch...
WOW, you totally expressed yourself in this one. The words you've used are beautiful, the flow is excellent. Its sad, touching and very powerful..... this is one of the best poems I've ever read. Wonderful write.
Thats beautiful and just so sad! Great ideas here and I love how you described and explored them. Sorry I can find no constructive critisim here other than using punctuation to mark out what your saying so you can display your emotions easier. Great job with beautiful expression!
O my god... i love this poem... its amazing how u can create such a mood as this , make it flow, and rhyme! wow you are an amazing poet.... i really enjoyed this poem... and it is so very true... its all so stereotypical these days.... ugh.. keep up the good work... i loved it
I can so relate to this(only too well).The love, the loss, the need and wanting, the pain, and yes hope can be a double edged sword, well, false hope anyway(which is a horrible limbo to be trapped in, believe me I know).So sad and beautiful yet ending with a bit of determination and a trace of true hope.Excellently written,very touching.