Comments : UNTITLED NO. 7

  • 12 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is nice, I like how you can be very descriptive while still using 'simple' words.

  • 12 years ago

    by erely

    This is very Beautiful........

  • 11 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I am glad you aimed that poem at someone, geez, lol. Really nice poem, Gary.

  • 11 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Comment sent by ELIZABETH:

    I love this poem!. Definitely one of my favorite poems of yours. The first line "I'll stare at the sunset until my eyes turn black" is so emotional, "The lone tree planted in the sand and the soft wind caresses my troubled mind" is so beautiful yet hurting. "Splitting open like a melon and it sets my soul free," I love the ending. It's like a love story all wrapped up in one little poem. You are an incredible writer.This poem is so beautiful and amazing. love, Elizabeth

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Resplendent work, very nicely done!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Gary this is beautiful. Usually I don't read Untitled poems, but I'm so glad you mentioned to do so as a prelude to Someplace where there are no dandelion seeds. Now it hits me even harder. *hugs*

  • 11 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    That's beautiful. I love the symbolisom in your poetry. 5/5
    -Kakashi

  • 11 years ago

    by just_genes

    The cadence of your line is subtle and enchanting in this poem.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.