This is such a great poem, i love it, you are a great writer, keep on writing it does help when you want to get everything out! can you please check out my 2 poems a life of total unhappiness and goodbye everyone (4 real) please comment on them it would mean alot! mwah if u need someone to talk to im here luv always maddison xxx

Well written and and good job.

I love you. I love you soo much. Take it how you want it, but you mean the world to me. I can't promise forever, but right now, at this very moment, I am in complete love with you. And I don't see that going away anytime soon. Even if you have other people, and you never tell me anything when I know something's wrong, I've been here, waiting for you Sarah, and I feel like waiting forever for you. There were times when I wanted to not do this, because it hurts, but I realized that I wouldn't want to be -any- other way. I don't want to be happy if it means not loving you. I hope you listen to this, and think about it when you're feeling like this poem. because you -are- loved.

Take Care,
Renee

This poem is so true.5/5

I like your peom alot it's really good and kind of sad i go through the same thing but we just have to learn how to live with it when you have tim can you see my poem

Great poem. very strong words, and depressing, but brilliantly written. there was so much emotion in this. keep writing more!

Your Poem Spoke Sincerely Through My Heart "In this world that you live in,
Even if it's against your will,
-No one- loves you truly,
And no one -ever- will" Perfected! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow... that was beautiful... your sopt in top 5 was well deserved... hope you stay.

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

I so belive this poem...far out you just wrote down exactly all of my thoughts on destiny..i was just thinking this..damn man your good

-angel-

love this poem
one of my faves

This is hella good ^^ I love it ^^ u get a 5 in my vote!

*~*KANDI*~*

I really liked it!