Love: Confusion Rejection and Self Doubt

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Sep 23, 2005


Someone
save me
god please
spare me

let me know that i am loved
cos right now everything just sux

now that im here
where do i go?
is he the right one?
how do i know?

a smile here
a hug there
but do they
really care

seeking to be accepted
but for now im rejected

now that we\'re here
where do we go?
is the time right?
how dod we know?

love bites
i know
lets take it
real slow
hold me
love me
my baby
please save me

now that we\'re here
where do we go?
is your love true?
how do i know?

let me know if you feel the same,
help me know that i am sane

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  • 18 years ago

    by mier

    I lurve your poem!!!! its so beautiful.... it's sad but at the same time it kept me thinkin... definitely a poem i'll remember....

    *dry tear*

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    IT CUT MY COMMENT!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Ohh hun very unique I've never read a poem like this

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Oh yea i love it wen u read my poems 2 it really does make me feel alot better

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Hey yea iso no how u feel coz right now i really like some1 but i no they dont feel the same....yea this is my email if u wont to talk... punk_rokchik4lyf@hotmail

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