Shaking because you touched me

by Flying Phoenix   Sep 25, 2005


Numbness creeps
Like a shiver through
My frozen fingers
Shaking
With what I let you do

Never I should
have gone so far
I cant control my shaking
Because
You were my shinning star

Shattered into pieces
You broke my beautiful dream
I cant forget the way
You
Tore it at the seam

My breathing becomes erratic
My temperature starts to rise
I still feel where you
Touched
The very thought, cries

Yet slowly Ill recover
And eventually I will heal
Never you will be near
Me
I'm free from this ordeal

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    Its excellent, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    That's beautiful. loved it.

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    Awww. sweet. spelling error tho seem should be seam should it not. forgive me if i'm wrong, i cant spell either...gd poem tho, interesting structure...:D