Omg... hunni... I'm so sorry that you feel this way. I hope that you're alright, if you need anything just let me know okay?! Well this poem is absolutely AMAZING... it flows good and you did a great job expressing the emotions. Top marks from me!! And if you do need to feel better...the icecream bit really does works like a charm. =) haha
It's... great... But please do go all depressionistic-dark on me. You are amazing how you are! Fantastic work though, I loved the words. Next poem, why don't you write a happy "Butterfly-Pony-Rainbow" Poem. Just kidding.
Ohh, first of all hats off to you for taking risks and trying something new with your poetry hehe, second of all that risk payed off this is amazzing hun, with two z's yes amazzing! well done once again it is so pretty, i love it
That was incredibly well written, I thought it was beautiful. I received a great sense of your message, and I enjoyed the rhyming. It was so clear and wonderful, even if it was about sadness... Thanks.
Left to battle for my life,
and try not to turn to the knife
thats my favorite part. i love hwo u used the depth of the sotry and just nail abouthwo everybodyy feels at one point opr at all points on life. you are a true artest of the emtions and can show it.