Comments : Trapped In My Misery

  • 12 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey...lol...finally able to spent some time to read ur poems...oh...so you wanna try something different...that's good...this is cool...rhyming is okay...love it...

  • 12 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darling. w0w that wasreally g0od. i liked it. very deep! g0od j0b. s0mething diff yer. neway keep it up! im talking t0 u 0n msn n0w =p l0lz cia0

  • 12 years ago

    by Cries at Night

    I like this alot! it puts into words things that others just cant. there are some very profound and very moving lines in there...too many to quote! X

  • 12 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg... hunni... I'm so sorry that you feel this way. I hope that you're alright, if you need anything just let me know okay?! Well this poem is absolutely AMAZING... it flows good and you did a great job expressing the emotions. Top marks from me!! And if you do need to feel better...the icecream bit really does works like a charm. =) haha

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    I like it very much its kinda like me!!keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by IhEaRtMaX

    I can relate to it. i feel so miserable, bcuz someone i guess i have to love bcuz im so miserable sumped me a while ago! i cant stand to look at him! email me earththrasher19@aol.com

  • 12 years ago

    by Matters

    It's... great... But please do go all depressionistic-dark on me. You are amazing how you are! Fantastic work though, I loved the words. Next poem, why don't you write a happy "Butterfly-Pony-Rainbow" Poem. Just kidding.

    Oh, by the way, your name still rocks. Anna owns.

    Matt

  • 12 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Such a good poem! i rele like it. i like how you list off emotions and they end up rhyming. its rele cool. gosh anna your so talented! don't give up the fight. luv ya lots ~lex

  • 12 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Ohh, first of all hats off to you for taking risks and trying something new with your poetry hehe, second of all that risk payed off this is amazzing hun, with two z's yes amazzing! well done once again it is so pretty, i love it

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    Great poem I really like it

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy B

    You re not alone girl, never.

  • 12 years ago

    by William Sirett

    That was incredibly well written, I thought it was beautiful. I received a great sense of your message, and I enjoyed the rhyming. It was so clear and wonderful, even if it was about sadness... Thanks.

  • 12 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    GREAT POEM I LOVED IT IT WAS SO GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Samara Elizabeth Vance

    I give you kubos on that poem. It's something I can really relate to. Keep it up!

    .:Samara:.
    PS- Check out some of my poems if you would like. Votes/Comments/Constructive criticism would be helpful!

  • 12 years ago

    by K*Miller*

    That poem is really good, I feel the same way, it almost made me cry. I love it!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    Good 1!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    Good 1!

  • 12 years ago

    by K*Miller*

    I love it!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by sonia

    Left to battle for my life,
    and try not to turn to the knife
    thats my favorite part. i love hwo u used the depth of the sotry and just nail abouthwo everybodyy feels at one point opr at all points on life. you are a true artest of the emtions and can show it.

  • 12 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    The ending was so powerful
    it's cool that you are trying new things
    props for this peom
    it was pretty good