Hey...lol...finally able to spent some time to read ur poems...oh...so you wanna try something different...that's good...this is cool...rhyming is okay...love it...

Hey darling. w0w that wasreally g0od. i liked it. very deep! g0od j0b. s0mething diff yer. neway keep it up! im talking t0 u 0n msn n0w =p l0lz cia0

I like this alot! it puts into words things that others just cant. there are some very profound and very moving lines in there...too many to quote! X

Omg... hunni... I'm so sorry that you feel this way. I hope that you're alright, if you need anything just let me know okay?! Well this poem is absolutely AMAZING... it flows good and you did a great job expressing the emotions. Top marks from me!! And if you do need to feel better...the icecream bit really does works like a charm. =) haha

I like it very much its kinda like me!!keep up the good work

I can relate to it. i feel so miserable, bcuz someone i guess i have to love bcuz im so miserable sumped me a while ago! i cant stand to look at him! email me earththrasher19@aol.com

It's... great... But please do go all depressionistic-dark on me. You are amazing how you are! Fantastic work though, I loved the words. Next poem, why don't you write a happy "Butterfly-Pony-Rainbow" Poem. Just kidding.

Oh, by the way, your name still rocks. Anna owns.

Matt

Such a good poem! i rele like it. i like how you list off emotions and they end up rhyming. its rele cool. gosh anna your so talented! don't give up the fight. luv ya lots ~lex

Ohh, first of all hats off to you for taking risks and trying something new with your poetry hehe, second of all that risk payed off this is amazzing hun, with two z's yes amazzing! well done once again it is so pretty, i love it

Great poem I really like it

You re not alone girl, never.

That was incredibly well written, I thought it was beautiful. I received a great sense of your message, and I enjoyed the rhyming. It was so clear and wonderful, even if it was about sadness... Thanks.

GREAT POEM I LOVED IT IT WAS SO GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I give you kubos on that poem. It's something I can really relate to. Keep it up!

.:Samara:.
PS- Check out some of my poems if you would like. Votes/Comments/Constructive criticism would be helpful!

That poem is really good, I feel the same way, it almost made me cry. I love it!!!!

Good 1!

Good 1!

I love it!!!!!

Left to battle for my life,
and try not to turn to the knife
thats my favorite part. i love hwo u used the depth of the sotry and just nail abouthwo everybodyy feels at one point opr at all points on life. you are a true artest of the emtions and can show it.

The ending was so powerful
it's cool that you are trying new things
props for this peom
it was pretty good