Comments : Why I Cry

  • 12 years ago

    by Lucy D1am0nd

    This poem is great, i love the way you tell this story.

  • 12 years ago

    by dustin

    Wow. great poem. loved it. keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    ='( so much pain and emotion expressed in this poem... this is absolutely amazing, hun. You're really talented... keep up the great writing, and I hope that you're okay!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Again another lovely poem. very good emotion. Its beautiful. I can only suggest maybe using more commas... because the give ur poem a sence of rhythm. other then that. its amazing:) great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Brokeback

    There are no words to explain how beautiful I think this was ! :$
    Amazing..

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Omg, this is a terrific poem!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i understand i feel the same way if you want to talk to someone that feels the same way just email me!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Loved this poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by anastasia

    I rated it a 5/5
    i can really realte to this poem about one of my x's very very good
    im gonna try to read all of ur poems but i mite run out of time but ill try u are really talented

  • 12 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Mmm... the sting felt from love's bite. It seems as though we always remember those who broke our hearts. Good write babe.

    --Sher

  • 12 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Its so sad >.< so expressive its like i can imagine this happening to me and the one i love >.

  • 12 years ago

    by LostSoul

    I like this poem, it is so sad, and I am sorry that your going through this, your very talented, and I love the form of the poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Pedro

    Very touching hun, reads great, very fluent and emotional.

  • 12 years ago

    by BrokenMemoriex

    The rhyming is excellent! Love your poems.. By the way, you're on my favourites list =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Katy

    Wow that was awesome. gave me chills cuz i know exactly how it feels.

  • 12 years ago

    by amelia

    Thhis is just awesome... sorry for delay in replying
    ur poem's great
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 12 years ago

    by rar

    This is really a good poem

  • 12 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey.. this is reli gud too.. i lyk the way u progressed thru the whole poem.. agen, ur rhyme was gr8.. keep it up
    i just have one suggestion.. i think u shud change ur last line from "Your the reason why i cry" to "You're the reason I cry" or "You're why I cry" if u wanna keep teh relationship between the line and the title.. coz "reason" is alredy "why".. does that make sense??? look out 4 the misspellings.. like "your" to "you're" coz they sound different in text (ok, i now they dont, but wen i read, homophones mean different..lyk wen u wrote your the first thing it thot was your as its meaning, soo..)
    well, i guess thats it
    ill be comin bak 4 more of ur poems asap.. ( i got tests evryday this week)
    take care
    NannO