Alyson,
I love this poem. It's totally awsome. Keep it up.

Wow this is a really powerful poem, i like it. thanks for your comment:)xxx

Wow!! this was just so unique.
great imagination indeed!!

i think i hv heard this title before "fade away"..:o))

well honestly...i liked ur poem and could sense the talent worth to add in my fav list...& so i did!!

take care

That was soo good and soo powerful well done..

Gud poem here too.. i lykd ur first stanza coz of the personification.. gave lyf 2 ur piece.. ur rhyming is gud here too, but u do have some spelling mistakes u myt wanna look them over
take care
Nouna
p.s. u noe, i reli think that u shud ryt about smthn more cheerful or at least not about death and suicide.. although i do appreciate and respect ur poems as products of ur feelings, i also think that u shud try to right smthn different.. just 4 a change of moods.. its all up to u, this is just a suggestion.. so wenever ur ready.. :)
take care girl
Nouna

Great work. Very well written. It has a lot of emotion. Amazing job.

A lot of emotion to feel the deep side, nothing will continues if walk out of the dark sorrow path... I like your work. 5/5

Awwwww... don't give up.. i'm here for you, if you need me.. ok?

hugs,
michelle

Wow! Amazing work. Your a great writer I mean that. You get the reader so invovled in what you are writing down and I like that alot. Keep on writing and Im sure you will go far.

~Juls~

This was great so original very emotinal and you draw the reader in to that poem i felt the hope when the dove came and the dissappointment when it left!!! exellent ALLY

Wow, That was really good!!! I love the line "Into the darkness I fade away"
Excelent peice! 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

What can I say another amazing poem take care sarah x

Awwww, love the parts with the dove, nice work!

I loved the way this poem started, i loved the choice of words!

much love and many kisses,
bex

Your writing here was so wonderful, I couldn't stop reading it. 5/5

Belive me very sad poem. i loved it. you are talented writer. i realy love this kind of poetry. 5/5