She's my replacement

by BrokenMemoriex   Jan 21, 2006

So she's my replacement?
The girl who'd take my place
You booked her beforehand
What? Just in case?

She came into our lives
And our bonds she divided
This scheming intruder
You unreasonably sided

She stole your heart from me
Your miraculous soulful gaze
You comply with her every request
And listen to what she says

She's got what I had in the past
All your attention and care
She's enjoying every minute
The fact that you're a pair

She's so spiteful and malicious
I don't know how you got engrossed
You probably forgot our little moments
How our hearts intercrossed

Doesn't she know she's shameless?
Breaking into our picture like that
She follows you like a leech
Your heart she aims to get

And you, how can you forget
All the stuff we used to do
You make me cry and cry
Just because of you

She's such a hypocrite
All those crocodile tears
She makes you concerned over her
While the sting in my heart sears

My body is numb and cold
My cheeks are still wet
Don't think I've gotten over you
I'll tell you what, not yet

What happened to our memories?
So you let her snatch them away?
The gaze into your eyes, they're hers now
And the sweet nothings you used to say

All the little gestures towards her
They're what you used to do to me
Don't you remember all these?
How can you just let things be?

You used to stare at me, not her
Our eyes shared a special bond
You're not the "you" I knew
You were cute, fun loving and fond

You are still the romantic I used to know
You still mesmerize and charm
But it's her you're into now, not me
You soothe but you harm

You're under her lethal enticement
Her vile and underhand means
Let me warn you - love is dangerous
Don't take her devious winks

Because of her you made a mistake
Realize it's not worth
She can only give you lust
But I can give you love


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  • 7 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Excellent Work! I give you 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dee

    I love the comments from all the the youngin's from your generation but let me say that you are an extremely POWERFUL writer for your age (or any age). I love to write and thanks for commenting on my poem but you are so intense in your writing. Such passion, such conviction and oh so grown up. Slow down girl..........your mind is well above your maturity.

    I would love to say "good job" but there is so much muscle in your writing that praise can easily go unexpressed. Write a book - you got it girl.

  • 12 years ago

    by Clarissa

    That was amazing... keep it up! 5/5
    and thnx for the comment =]

  • 12 years ago

    by Anne

    Wowww that's great!!!!!,, much better than mine ^^ i'm sorry if the are similar, i had no idea.. i just wrote it after i talked to him & hmm.. you know the ending.. Xx

  • 12 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    That was a great read i h8 it when other girls do that but i hope your ok keep it all up love ya 5/5