Comments : My Wall

  • This is a great poem.. different of most Iv read.. I really like it.. 5/5!! keep writting.. and about the tittle.. ur kinda right:P. and its hard for me 2.. If I were u, I would put somethin that let peopl kno what it is about.. look 4 a word that expreses something for "what people would do"// or somethin.. lol.. but GREAT POEM!

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*You are my only one*~

    Thank you for commenting on my poems! This is a really good poem, i give it a 5/5. It has a lot of emotional feeling to it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Loulou

    Great poem 5/5

    thanx for the comments

    if you didnt know THAT DAY is actually a prequel to these word to you(a letter) you should read that!

  • Hey, i liked this poem. It read well and your use of words is good.
    Well Done.

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Great poem..AS for the title it os a little hard..but I would name it something like my wall because toward the end you talk alot about putting up a wall which fite the over all theme

  • 12 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Thanks Fallen Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by Michelle

    Good.. excellent. 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    I liked this poem particularly because it goes somewhere, and althought it has a sadder message at first, you brought it up in the end, that is hard to do and you did it well. Nice job. Some cool lines I really enjoyed:

    "Once You open Up And Tear Down That Wall,
    You'll Seize To Know That You Had Nothing To be Afraid Of After All."

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 12 years ago

    by Delia

    Wow this is an amazing poem. I love it!


  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aye, This is great, loved it how u did some short lines n some longer ones, its got a great deal of emotion put into it aswell, im lovin it =]
    luv natz x0x

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    I really liked this one, and the titile suits it perfectly, by the way.
    As always~ Kate

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is awesome, I really liked it, If you want another name for it, Maby you could call it "Afraid" But anywho 5/5 =]

    - natz x0x

  • 12 years ago

    by Cassandra

    Very good poem, i think one of the resons so many of us suffer from deppression or loneliness is because we put up walls to block out hurt, for many of us have experinced it before....5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Olorin

    I am in this situation all the time. I am always to afriad of what others might think of me to tell them how I really feel even the ones closest to me. Its really hard to make someone understand you when you are to fearful of getting hurt by someone you love and respect. A great poem keep writing I love your stuff :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, very good imagery, strong emotions, the flow was off sometimes but it wasn't too bad. Thanks again for the comments, keep up the fantastic work you're doing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    That poem is guss like me. i love it great name for it.

  • 8 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    I like this piece you wrote; it takes someone or something in you to tear that wall down. It's so hard!