This is a great poem.. different of most Iv read.. I really like it.. 5/5!! keep writting.. and about the tittle.. ur kinda right:P. and its hard for me 2.. If I were u, I would put somethin that let peopl kno what it is about.. look 4 a word that expreses something for "what people would do"// or somethin.. lol.. but GREAT POEM!
I liked this poem particularly because it goes somewhere, and althought it has a sadder message at first, you brought it up in the end, that is hard to do and you did it well. Nice job. Some cool lines I really enjoyed:
"Once You open Up And Tear Down That Wall,
You'll Seize To Know That You Had Nothing To be Afraid Of After All."
I am in this situation all the time. I am always to afriad of what others might think of me to tell them how I really feel even the ones closest to me. Its really hard to make someone understand you when you are to fearful of getting hurt by someone you love and respect. A great poem keep writing I love your stuff :)