Comments : The Secret Crush

  • 11 years ago

    by Mia

    I love how your poems are so well written and honest. ~Mia

  • Wow...did this really happend to you???...i really hope it didn't....u r such a beautiful writer and u alwayz touch my heart with the poemz that i read....keep up the great work...byez

  • 11 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wowie Wow Wow Wow!!! lol that was an excellent poem!! did this really happen?!

    Take Care ((If you need to talk, I'm here!))

    CK♥

  • 11 years ago

    by sandra young

    Very touching. it almost made me cry just reading it. It makes U think just , U never know when or how quickly someone can be taken away. very well written.

  • 11 years ago

    by Shane

    I certainly hope this didn't happen to you.

    Keep in touch.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow this is so good... I loved it, and it teaches us to speak our minds and let ppl know how much we really care now... you should check out PoEtTeSs poem about something like this I think is called And then you will remember... its similar... but this was very good, I gave it a 5 ofcourse, nothing less... Keep writting, OK? lol Aiight well byez,

    ::MELI::

  • 11 years ago

    by Paige

    There are NO words for your work i cant tell you how ha i dont no wot to say your just amazing xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Endless lost love. your poem is like grasping the stars. it breaks my heart for Kody. feeling. emotion. pain. love. loss. everything is part of our life. thanks for expressing this with your beautiful words.

  • 11 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    You are definitly the best writer on this site, and i love reading all of your poems!! They are all so touching and heartwarming. Keep writing, please!

  • 11 years ago

    by firexflys

    Wow great your work is amazing i love reading it keep up the amazing work i cant wait to read more. i love the ending to this one too. life just to short to keep love to our self share it with that person 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Okay, I'm about to cry. This is so heartbreakingly sad. Beautiful, and for me, very inspiring. Thank you for writing this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW I have goosebumps! First....terrific choice of title! Loved it

    Second, This hurting girl whose heart is broken
    All because of love unspoken

    Those last lines captured everything! So sorry of the loss of your friend...i hurts I know it does hun...this poem was amazing though and you deserve loads of credit!!
    5/5
    CHelsey

  • 11 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    This was beautifully written...a touching and heartfelt piece.

    love Ann

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha

    Awww wow TinyDancer I really hope this isnt a true story... Very nicely written, as always! Keep up the good work

    sammie

  • 11 years ago

    by Atomic

    I noticed how most of your pems have very important messages, can't wait to read more.

    Sorry, wish I can actually critique it, but I love it te way it is.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 11 years ago

    by Bethan

    So sad, I am terribly sorry for your loss and hope you can find the strength to overcome such a tragic event but the poem was wonderfully heartbreaking and beautifully written. I hope you are okay, keep your head up and keep your memories forever in your heart.

    xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by FASHIONISTA

    Wow! You're a great poet. I wish i could write like you one dayyy:). anywayz keep up the awesome writing!

    Vanessa_~*

  • 11 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Awww that is a really sad touching poem. I really loved the last stanza and especially the two last lines. It has such meaning and emotion. Great poem. Luv ya xxoo

  • 11 years ago

    by kallie

    Once again you've written an AMAZING poem!! seriously you are soo good!! how do you do it?? wow what a sad story!!! but great poem!! keep it up!! and if you could comment on some of my new ones i'd love to know what you think!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Monika

    How sad really sad almost made me cry