Aaw thats so sad *tear*
i was seriously choking up =(
fantastic work =)
keep it up
take care, kat xOx

This is a brilliant poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

WOW this is a good poem I really liked it your a great poet 5/5

Tearz!! i lve this poem, its so original, h0o iz this about? i hope this person is ok!! luv maddison

Now there in her coffin she lays cold
But up in heaven, her baby she holds

My two favortie lines because it was the only part where the person could be happy
But this poem is so sad
It was a great poem though very nice job

Wow... I loved the flow of the poem. Nicely done. It's sad that it ended like that though. Great write. 5/5

Wow! Very well written. It's so sad. Losing a child is the worst thing in the world for a mother. Keep it up! 5/5

Aw, This is sad. If this happened to you, Im so sorry. It must hurt alot..Anyways, Great poem 5/5 =] Cheer up

- natz x0x

I'm seriously at a loss for words... this is so sad...
excellent work 5/5 keep it up
xoxXxox pip

~*WoW.... tears are cumin 2 my eyes... ur a really great writer n i really liked tis one 5/5 miscarrage is something that wood b hard 2 write about i have a baby gurl i don't kno wut i'd do if i wood have had one with her but yea keep it up i like it alot*~ XoXo
-Crazy

Sad, but true. 5/5

-Taylor

It's so sad.. made me cry.. =[

Wow that is a really good poem , really well written (Y) 5/5

Wow that was good!..loved it!
~*Linz*~

Hey, this is really amazing..itz touching, and i cant imagine it...*hugz* i hope you are alrite...there are alwayz rainbowz after the rain...rite? no matter how hard thingz may be now, they will alwayz get better...hope u are doin ok, great poem, keep it up
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey there,
Awww honey.. Im sorry about ur loss..I cried when I read this..:( I really dont know what else to say. but well written poem my dear.
Monique

Wow that was an awesome poem......my sister is going through that she was so happy that she was pregnant wen she lost it she was so devastated...its so sad...

neway great poem keep up the good work

allana
xoxo

I loved your poem. i just wanted to know were you drawing on any experience?

Sad...good...sorry for your loss...i also just lost my baby...20 wks pregnant with little girl...very hard..writing helps...you have true talent

OMG! thats so...touching..that was awesome..mwa im sorry