Comments : The Truth Behind Her Tears [ About Miscarriage ]

  • 11 years ago

    by herewithme

    Aaw thats so sad *tear*
    i was seriously choking up =(
    fantastic work =)
    keep it up
    take care, kat xOx

  • 11 years ago

    by sarah

    This is a brilliant poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 11 years ago

    by Kys Dirty Little Secret

    WOW this is a good poem I really liked it your a great poet 5/5

  • Tearz!! i lve this poem, its so original, h0o iz this about? i hope this person is ok!! luv maddison

  • 11 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Now there in her coffin she lays cold
    But up in heaven, her baby she holds

    My two favortie lines because it was the only part where the person could be happy
    But this poem is so sad
    It was a great poem though very nice job

  • 11 years ago

    by J Lau

    Wow... I loved the flow of the poem. Nicely done. It's sad that it ended like that though. Great write. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by authum darkness

    Wow! Very well written. It's so sad. Losing a child is the worst thing in the world for a mother. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw, This is sad. If this happened to you, Im so sorry. It must hurt alot..Anyways, Great poem 5/5 =] Cheer up

    - natz x0x

  • 11 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    I'm seriously at a loss for words... this is so sad...
    excellent work 5/5 keep it up
    xoxXxox pip

  • 11 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*WoW.... tears are cumin 2 my eyes... ur a really great writer n i really liked tis one 5/5 miscarrage is something that wood b hard 2 write about i have a baby gurl i don't kno wut i'd do if i wood have had one with her but yea keep it up i like it alot*~ XoXo
    -Crazy

  • 11 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Sad, but true. 5/5

    -Taylor

  • 11 years ago

    by Bec

    It's so sad.. made me cry.. =[

  • 11 years ago

    by monica

    Wow that is a really good poem , really well written (Y) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Wow that was good!..loved it!
    ~*Linz*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really amazing..itz touching, and i cant imagine it...*hugz* i hope you are alrite...there are alwayz rainbowz after the rain...rite? no matter how hard thingz may be now, they will alwayz get better...hope u are doin ok, great poem, keep it up
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 11 years ago

    by Monique

    Hey there,
    Awww honey.. Im sorry about ur loss..I cried when I read this..:( I really dont know what else to say. but well written poem my dear.
    Monique

  • 11 years ago

    by dancer

    Wow that was an awesome poem......my sister is going through that she was so happy that she was pregnant wen she lost it she was so devastated...its so sad...

    neway great poem keep up the good work

    allana
    xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by lucyjade

    I loved your poem. i just wanted to know were you drawing on any experience?

  • 11 years ago

    by Desiree

    Sad...good...sorry for your loss...i also just lost my baby...20 wks pregnant with little girl...very hard..writing helps...you have true talent

  • 11 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    OMG! thats so...touching..that was awesome..mwa im sorry