A Room.

by FrozenTearsBleed   Mar 30, 2006

Holy night in sweet silence and dream,
This night I\'m bleeding I scream.

Down on the floor im crying hard,
I break the window get cut with a single shard.

Rains drop thunder booms,
Running through this house cant choose a room.

A room to stay and die,
A room where I can go in and cry.

I cant cry alone.
I lie down on the floor and groan.

I\'m sick to my tummy and I cant hold it in,
I know Ive been bad I cant help but sin.

The wolf howls at the moon,
Hear the spiders crawl up the wall makeing its own little tune.

Stars twinkle the light is dim,
I dont ever forget I loved him.

The room where we were kept,
Up the stairs I quietly crept.

Lay in my bed with tears stream down,
I try to smile but I seem to frown.

This room is mine and never yours,
KNow I get up and shut my door.


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  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww..this is so sad.. great job! this poem contained alot of emotion, used good descriptions and language, and flowed well! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Meggie33

    EXCELLENT JOB!! kind of freaky, because im not into all the depressed stuff... but you still did very well with putting it together and everything... great job!!


  • 12 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Not really clear and seem to wander alot on this one...

  • 12 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    "I know Ive been bad I cant help but sin"
    This line kept me reading because i can relate with it so well lol, very good poem...5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Meggie33

    WOO HOO go meg! haha.... lol good poem! would luv to hear more shtuff!! cooment on mine and ill comment on yours! luv ya gurl**