Enchanting. The seeming plaintive atmosphere of the poem, along with the heartwarming thoughts portrayed, captivated my heart. I further adored the theme you used. How first moments of a baby brings joy to every mother is rather tantalizing and nostalgic. =]
`I liked how you illustrated a child as:
"The worlds beauty
Held in the arms of love"
It's a beautiful piece, overall. Perhaps applying punctuations will enhance its flow and the poem itself as well. But, nevertheless, it is a fine effort. Take care. ~Marian