To be honest not my favorite type of poetry, it is quite cliche, in my opinion of course.
I think that you could put a little more details into emotions and make them stronger. In second, fourth and fifth stanzas there isn't rhyming so that quite threw me off cause rest of this piece rhymes, also I personally think that rhyming is somehow typical and I could predict each rhyme so I didn't find much creativity there.
Also you used some words more times which always leaves negative impression on me.
But this is just my personal opinion, it was anyway pleasure to read this.
Well this is definitely an "awwww" poem. O many here will fall in love with it. I thought it was nice, although the was a little awkward in placed. I'm not sure what the rhme scheme was, so that through me off a bit. I'm not not a lost poem type of person, so maybe I'm being prejudiced.
Tis another very good poem joe, the title tis cool, the flows perfect and the first stanza rocked, been awhile since ive commented your work, i give this one a 5/5 as the others, keep them coming man!!!