Starlight Night (Reprise)

by Italian Stallion   Apr 5, 2006


Starlight night
shining ever so bright
take my hand
by the calmness of the moonlight

As we walk
hand in hand
I ask you this
as you look at the stars

Will you be mine?
I know I've waited a long time
come with me
I have something to show

Sit here in the ever so soft
light of the night
look at the stars reflection on the water
as I seek you with this soft melody of mine

I glance at you
as you look at me
our eyes meet
and we can't separate

I start to play that soft melody of mine
as you sit and sip your wine
we start to intertwine

your warmth next to me
listening to the sea
I can't help but to agree
This is the place to be

you make me feel so right
on such a beautiful night
being here with you
is such a delight

As I turn to look you in the eyes
you say "you are not like all the other guys
that people speak of
you are one of a kind."

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 9 years ago

    by Nix

    To be honest not my favorite type of poetry, it is quite cliche, in my opinion of course.
    I think that you could put a little more details into emotions and make them stronger. In second, fourth and fifth stanzas there isn't rhyming so that quite threw me off cause rest of this piece rhymes, also I personally think that rhyming is somehow typical and I could predict each rhyme so I didn't find much creativity there.
    Also you used some words more times which always leaves negative impression on me.
    But this is just my personal opinion, it was anyway pleasure to read this.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cayce

    Well this is definitely an "awwww" poem. O many here will fall in love with it. I thought it was nice, although the was a little awkward in placed. I'm not sure what the rhme scheme was, so that through me off a bit. I'm not not a lost poem type of person, so maybe I'm being prejudiced.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 9 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Cute! *sighs* :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Pete

    And whoever said romance was dead ...

    Wonderful poem Joe, word choice was just about spot on. I normally prefer soemthing that sticks to a rigid rhyme structure, but this works out just nicely as it is.

    Overall very nice romantic piece.

    ~Pete.

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis another very good poem joe, the title tis cool, the flows perfect and the first stanza rocked, been awhile since ive commented your work, i give this one a 5/5 as the others, keep them coming man!!!