That was amazingly written. the structure and idea were flawless and creative. idunno how u find these topics and words but u def. hav a gift...and quite frankly, im not really fat, just bigger than i used to be...its just that i hav some friends with great bodies that are hard to see..im working out tho and im gonna look better! and i never have been or will be one of those girly ppl....ill get down and dirty sometimes and then i hav my weird ditzy side....i hav a very colorful; and funky style..im in love with fashion but im no hollister girl..that stuff is cute but i just went school shopping and everything looked the same..my friend and i got shirts and belts that are really cute but fun...and thx alot for the comment and shoutout, ur really great.
love ya lots,
Wow i like this one alot for some reason... its just really good...a different topic than i usually read and i love new things so this one really impressed me. and i really liked your writing style... 5/5 from me. keep it up.
Run away there is a cop
[[ I could downrate this poem for this line alone. The poem is AMAZING, save for this line. Find another rhyme, in my opinion.]]
I really, really, really love this poem of yours. I think it is actually by far your best. It's creative, the form is different, the flows wonderful, the rhyming perfect except for that one line, the message amazing.
Absolutely a wonderful job. ^^