Comments : Fire Children

  • 12 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was amazingly written. the structure and idea were flawless and creative. idunno how u find these topics and words but u def. hav a gift...and quite frankly, im not really fat, just bigger than i used to be...its just that i hav some friends with great bodies that are hard to working out tho and im gonna look better! and i never have been or will be one of those girly ppl....ill get down and dirty sometimes and then i hav my weird ditzy side....i hav a very colorful; and funky in love with fashion but im no hollister girl..that stuff is cute but i just went school shopping and everything looked the friend and i got shirts and belts that are really cute but fun...and thx alot for the comment and shoutout, ur really great.
    love ya lots,

  • 11 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    That was incredible too. It is really strong emotionally. It is sort of angry at something. Sometimes I feel that way. Just let the bad happen so it can only get better. Good work

  • 11 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow i like this one alot for some reason... its just really good...a different topic than i usually read and i love new things so this one really impressed me. and i really liked your writing style... 5/5 from me. keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Very good poem. The flow went off in some places but your words made up for it. This topic you choose was great. I also loved the way you layed out the poem and the repetition in it. 5/5

    Keep up the good work!

    -Shannon <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Really nice poem... I like it :D
    Keep up this good work

    ~ Sumit Ojha

  • 11 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Couldnt really concentrate on what you were saying bt other thn that perfect so i stll gave you a 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Keith

    Hey, amazin poem, great ideas, real talent.
    comment back plz :D

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Run away there is a cop
    [[ I could downrate this poem for this line alone. The poem is AMAZING, save for this line. Find another rhyme, in my opinion.]]

    I really, really, really love this poem of yours. I think it is actually by far your best. It's creative, the form is different, the flows wonderful, the rhyming perfect except for that one line, the message amazing.
    Absolutely a wonderful job. ^^

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I think that this poem was really strong. i really enjoyed this piece allot. Its very creative.. your best yet

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A very original poem, to say the least.
    By repeating words you made it into a kind of chant, the kind they sing to bewitch a person. Very special poem!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Little pyros!!!! So cool. I love the topic. This is a very creative ... the flow was great, the word choice was decent, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Good chant

  • 10 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    =( this a beautiful yet sad poem. aw, jenny jenny...i just love how you can paint such a wonderful picture and yet i understand the message you are trying to send out to us.

    i love you jenny ^_^ your my best friend ever.
    you're so amazing at the things you do. Never change my sweet jenny ^_^.

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem well written strong message