Comments : Secrets

  • 13 years ago

    by hopeless08

    I love this poem. It's great and I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing I'd love to read more of your writings.


  • 13 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I thought it was really good, It was short but sweet well not really sweet but you get the point.. it was very true and you used good words to express what a secret it good work 5/5


  • 13 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    I love it. i can relate to this poem. but is i a love poem? im not sure...

    the rhyming style was very interesting, and the pom floed very well


  • 13 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    WOW, really loved this one, gotta be my favorite of yours!! really nicely done, the flow was amazing and the words so true.

    ps. told ya id give you your comments ;) 3 to go! lol.. take care n keep up the great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Short but to the point. This was fantastic! And it was such a good topic to write about. Really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I really liked your poem, and loved the theme. It's so well written. Great job! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Nice rhyming and rhythm. Is this really a love poem? Or at least a conventional one? Somehow I feel like this is more about poetry and the release that expression can bring rather than romantic love, but maybe not.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darien

    Very nice write, that is the best description of a 'secret' I have ever read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I can relate to this poem so much, as I'm sure many others can also. The rhyming was really good and didn't seem forced. I love the overall meaning of it. People write to let out their emotions and tell secrets about themselves. Great job on this. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Heartfelt emotions, freely expressed;
    Frustrated feelings, slowly released.
    Wishful dreams, here to stay;
    Painful memories, washed away.
    All these poems, hidden pain;
    A secret it is, they remain.
    [I really liked that whole part! It was amazing!]

    The poem itself was short yet really great. You chose excellent wording for it aswell. A really strong peice. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cayce

    Great job on this one. I liked the topic. The rhyming and flow were really good. It was short, but really enjoyable to read. Keep writting!

    Cayce x

  • 12 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Made its point with its short-ish-ness. Some really great words that were able to give this more depth and feeling. Strong lines that were easy to follow and had a smooth flow.

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Love it! Very true

  • 12 years ago

    by Sole

    Loved it. It's so true, the secret that every poem holds within it. But sometimes, it's possible to break the defences that the poems hold. And sometimes, tru emotion can show through any poem. As this one. It not only does justcie to itself, but to every other one of your poems. It makes your other poems all seem 'truer' as it were, it brings out their true light.
    Amazing write.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 12 years ago

    by Rocky

    I really liked this poem. to the point and so true. you plainly give the reasons for writing poetry that i think are true of all of us. good work

  • 12 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    How true. poetry can be our way out of so much. You described that perfectly in this piece. Funny how we pretend nothing is wrong than post these words here that show all the problems within our own lives. Granted, sometimes we write what isn't applicable to us, but often we do, whether we know it or not. A good piece!

  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    For SUCH A SHORT POEM it really flowed and sounded really good.. good job and keep up with the work.. sorry there isn't anything that Iwould change about this