Nice rhyming and rhythm. Is this really a love poem? Or at least a conventional one? Somehow I feel like this is more about poetry and the release that expression can bring rather than romantic love, but maybe not.
I can relate to this poem so much, as I'm sure many others can also. The rhyming was really good and didn't seem forced. I love the overall meaning of it. People write to let out their emotions and tell secrets about themselves. Great job on this. 5/5
Heartfelt emotions, freely expressed;
Frustrated feelings, slowly released.
Wishful dreams, here to stay;
Painful memories, washed away.
All these poems, hidden pain;
A secret it is, they remain.
[I really liked that whole part! It was amazing!]
The poem itself was short yet really great. You chose excellent wording for it aswell. A really strong peice. Keep it up! 5/5
Loved it. It's so true, the secret that every poem holds within it. But sometimes, it's possible to break the defences that the poems hold. And sometimes, tru emotion can show through any poem. As this one. It not only does justcie to itself, but to every other one of your poems. It makes your other poems all seem 'truer' as it were, it brings out their true light.
How true. poetry can be our way out of so much. You described that perfectly in this piece. Funny how we pretend nothing is wrong than post these words here that show all the problems within our own lives. Granted, sometimes we write what isn't applicable to us, but often we do, whether we know it or not. A good piece!