Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww That was soooooo sweet Darien...i loved it just loved it, i hope one day i can find a guy like you..lol you are soo sweet!! it was a great and very emotional poem, it definitely made me smile! great job
So the flow had been extremely well done. I really enjoed this because of not only the words but the flow and imagery. I really enjoyed this piece. Really enjoyed this a lot cuz this had been written quite well. Usually I don't read this type of genre but I'm glad that I did for this.
Awww!! Darien!!! That was soo sweet!! I loved it! I wish I could write happy love poems like that! Lol. When ever I try they always turn out bad. Anyways, this poem was just so beautiful it made me smile!! Great job!
I thought it was beautiful, and the way you told this story of love was picturesquely expressed. Each line had its on intricate meaning and it all came together as a lovely piece of work. Very well done, it was just divine.
Aww.. that was soo cute!! i loved it from A-Z!! lol, funny, im not into that kinda thing, but i guess u just got the talent.. i thot that was very well written, amazing rhyme and gr8 flow..ur rhyming words seemed to come easy to u.. i absolultely loved the first stanza.. it def stood out, flaunting:P hehe, i cud totally feel the love in the poem.. its just so adorable!! :P hehe
the last stanza was just awesome, too.. esp the last line, it reli shows the love and devotion.. that ull be together for the rest of ur lives.. loved the title, too..
keep it up
Aww... that is so sweet. It made me cry! Did you get married? Either way this poem is amazing. The flow was really good, pretty much flawless. It somewhat reminds me of how my brother's wedding was. But anyways, I love this poem. It was very descriptive and I love how you described as an angel, very sweet. Great job on this!