Farewell pt.2

by Misstress   Jul 13, 2006


Along with the ink
That drips within my fingers,
Tangles of confusions.

In between words
That braided this letter,
Glimpses of distance.

With a melody engraved
The hums of misplaced notes

And in these empty pages
Cocoons of photographs
Plucked for remembrance

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  • 17 years ago

    by Flaminia

    You did use strange complex words,but you've used them really well.This makes the poem even deeper. It gives the poem strength.Complicated words don't always fit well in poetry,but that's not your case.Excellent.That's a five!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ksusha

    This is awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    This poem is really good! My honest opinion is that you have used some very intresting words that i might have not used but i think it sounds good any-way!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is another good one loved it !

  • 17 years ago

    by redLatina

    Oh how deep ur poem is....

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