Comments : Fallen From Heaven

  • 11 years ago

    by awww

    Wow BEAUTIFUL! i really like it... you have such a way in expressing yourself... it has such a way that captivates people... the rhyming was great too... keep up the great work!

    ps: if you hav time... read my Made in tears! :D

    ~angel~

  • 11 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Certainly was an excellent use of descriptive language. The only thing I would have wanted different (this is a small change, and rather insignificant) is that you used the cloud metaphor in two parts of your poem, the 2nd and 3rd stanza, and I thought you could replace one of the cloud metaphors with a different one -- spice things up a bit.

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    AWW! I loved this poem! Just LOVED it! Lol. I know I'm being a bit ecstatic >.< I liked the flow, and all the lines were almost the same length, which i sometimes have trouble doing lol. Keep it up! =) xoxo 5/5

    Samantha

  • 11 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Absolutely beautiful. I think this is one of your best works. Maybe its that I adore love poems, but it is actually that good. 5/5 keep up the good work Loretta

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Talee --
    Aww, so cute! I loved this. The rhyming and the flow didn`t seem forced at all -- they were perfect! Your spelling and grammar, was flawless as well. =D. You did a wonderful job, as usual. Keep it up! 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 11 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This was a very nice love poem!!It made me think of how much love fills our lives..the flow was pretty good, just a bit off in some places, but over all it was very Cute=)

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job, great descriptions too. Though it would be nice if you could somehow shorten your lines.

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a very touhing piece. beautifully written. such beautiful words. very well written. good job on this one. l0ved it xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Lol.. that is so weird.. i could swear that i commented this before.. hmm.. lol.. anyways, it was an amazing poem! the flow was effortless and your rhymes were perfect.. the emotion was clear and your descriptions were b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l! loved it taleee! and as i have said before :P this WILL happen to you.. love youu!

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! At the ends I got chills! How adorable! It's kind of long, but how adorable! So sweet, so tender, so perfect! Great Job!

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow Nat, wow. This was absolutely amasing, don't you ever doubt your talent. I usuallly hate reading love poems, but this one was definately an exception, you wrote this so beautifully, and i loved every word. You are so talented! I love you

    --Steph

  • 11 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    AwW,what a beautiful poem! Its one of the sweetest that ive read by far, indeed.The rhyming was great and the ending was so cute! I really loved this poem.You are a wonderful writer, girl!Great work, keep writing like that!
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 11 years ago

    by donna

    Excellent poem.. very sweet and extremely well written 5/5 xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Zack O.o

    You got an almostOttava Rime. Try to extend it you got ababcc try getting abababcc it will be better recognized by the poetic community.

  • 11 years ago

    by Heidi

    Oh my gosh! i absolutely adored this piece. the writing was so brilliant and beautiful. i can't even use all the words to discribe how much i loved it, it was amazing. definatly keep it up, 100/5.

    heidi may

  • 11 years ago

    by Biscuit

    A very good strong ending to a brilliant poem, i love your style of writing its very graceful and each of your poems explore something different. im going to add u to my favs as u r an insppiration to me :)

    -biscuit-

  • 11 years ago

    by Biscuit

    A very good strong ending to a brilliant poem, i love your style of writing its very graceful and each of your poems explore something different. im going to add u to my favs as u r an inspiration to me :)

    -biscuit-

  • 11 years ago

    by Kylie

    I love your poem, this is one of my favourites. Very good work, i look forward to reading some of your other poems, well done!!

  • 11 years ago

    by gabrielle.Xx

    Brilliant

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*~Victoria~*~

    Wow!that was a great poem u have alot of talent... i wish i was that good lol but that was a beautiful poem good job!!!