Once upon a time suicide

by gabrielle.Xx   Aug 7, 2006


Once upon a time there was a girl who never cried,
her life was almost perfect except for all the hidden lies,
her mother didnt see it all her friends thought she was great,
hiding behind her makeup, her jewelrey.. acting fake..
she never spoke in public all her thoughts kept her mute,
all the guys she dated didnt really suit,
she didnt know what she looked for in life or in her dreams,
all those tears are bulding up they are going to make her scream,
this girls a ballerina she will dance inside your head,
never did we see that this would lead us to her death,
she was the perfect kind of girl so graceful and unique,
but all the thoughts she kept in her head leading her to never speak,
her grades were fairly average but in art she always stood out,
it was easy to paint emotions.. its too easy to scream and shout,
this girl will never leave our minds shes always dancing in our heads,
never did we begin to think this thought would lead us to her death..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Caytii

    Wow good poem..i almost cried!! :( .lol...5/5 keep writing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow!
    I loved this.
    I really, really enjoyed the imagery and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and flow very much.
    A very good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffany

    Loved the wording and the poem itself :)

  • 17 years ago

    by kyliecat009

    GREAT POEM!!! I looove the feeling of this poem. I love the point! I think that people need to see this kind of thing. Because things like that happen in real life. too many people are being fake and it leads to problems for them and others!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffany

    I liked it.