Comments : Trapped In Time

  • 11 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Another awsome poem im think bout to put u on favs......ur really good its a 5 for me!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, beautiful explaination, and very well written. ur an expert.
    great poem
    keep it up
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Brilliant. Short, bittersweet and VERY to-the-point.
    Peace out, boy scout.
    o.~

  • 11 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wow. That was brilliant. Perfect flow lovely choice of vocab and great imagery. I just adored the first three stanzas.
    Amazing job. Keep it up
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! that was amazing.. absolutely brilliant.. the descriptions were beautiful and explained your points well.. the imagery really added effect and it flowed well! great job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Wow...beautiful!
    5/5 for sure.
    Great flow and wonderful choice of words. It went above and beyond, i loved it@@

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow... This poem is absolutely amazing. I Loved it. It flowed very well, letting you focus on the words and feelings they provoke. You had some great word usage in this and I loved the way that you ended it. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    Awesome! I'm impressed! Fantastic poem and so well written! Loved it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Omg i loveddddd that poem..i am completely speechless tho..it was great the rhythm and flow was perfect it had an awesome meaning behind it! great job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow... Very nicely written... Just amazing.. I love when you can get three or four different meanings out of poems and yours was just that! Great job

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Catherine Stephens

    Wow, that poem was so deep. I don't know why but writing sad and depressing poems is a lot easier than haappy jumpy ones. But that's just me. Very good job

    8/5 I wish I coould give you that but the vote only goes to 5 so 5 it is

    kitty

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    This was really gud, keep it up, i liek ur poems

  • 11 years ago

    by *~*pureconfusion15*~*

    WOW!!!! thats one of the best peoms i've heard in a while!!! AMAZING!

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Whoa...So much emotion in this. Great job. I loved how short you made the lines. They flowed really well. I liked the flow a lot, and I liked the topic you chose and how you expressed the topic. Great write! Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful poem and great imagery. The way you applied "I" into the 2nd and 3rd stanza was terrific.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aline

    WAW 5/5 for sure i liked it

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wonderful! I love poems with short and simple words. They are the most powerful! This was definately a good write, dark and superior in every way. keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    WOW! amazing! wonderfull! great! i loved this poem! it flowed so easy! makes you never wanna stop reading! i loved it 5/5

    Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow this poem is really good!! 5/5! there is nothing wrong with it so i ain't going to critise it (soz) n i don't know why it isn't a 5 not a 4.7 ???

  • 11 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Now this is an EXCELLENT poem. Short lines, but flows extremely well, my favorite style of writing. I love the second and third stanzas the most, very very well written and really has imagery. Very much a fantasy poem, I love it!! (5/5).