Wow... This poem is absolutely amazing. I Loved it. It flowed very well, letting you focus on the words and feelings they provoke. You had some great word usage in this and I loved the way that you ended it. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!
Whoa...So much emotion in this. Great job. I loved how short you made the lines. They flowed really well. I liked the flow a lot, and I liked the topic you chose and how you expressed the topic. Great write! Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo
Now this is an EXCELLENT poem. Short lines, but flows extremely well, my favorite style of writing. I love the second and third stanzas the most, very very well written and really has imagery. Very much a fantasy poem, I love it!! (5/5).