Comments : Dear Daddy

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written

  • 11 years ago

    by autumn

    This is a very heartfelt poem, and it brought tears to my eyes... your a terrific poet and i love your work!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Awh i have goosebumps.
    Definitly was wonderful
    and deserve's nothing but 5'z!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Bianca

    That was beautiful great job ~bee~

  • 11 years ago

    by ღ_Bethany_ღ

    Wow kwl it rhymes lol gd writing keep it up look @ sum of mine plz xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Starburst Juicy

    I know how that is girl I lost my mom to crack

  • 11 years ago

    by hom3gurl420

    Thats really good it brought a tear to my eye

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsea Campbell

    Another poem that gave me goosebumps and tears to my eyes. well done.......

    chelsea

  • 11 years ago

    by Jin

    Very sad, but true for many. Though my dad isn't on crack, he still left us for someone else. I feel like a little seven year old girl inside, everytime I think about my dad. This poem made me want to cry, it's sad that a seven year old has to go through something that I went through in my twenties (but I guess it all hurts the same no matter how old you are).
    This is another great poem!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    My dad has never come to like any thing that i've ever done:( so i no that feeling all to well:(....but i like the point of view you put on this poem great job...i really don't no what to say
    thank you for helping me:)
    i no it will take time maybe forever but now i kinda have a start:)
    auna

  • 10 years ago

    by Mel

    I love it. it was amazingly written, and the perspective u put on it was so good. i almost cried.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    *tear rolls down his cheek* That was really nice... 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by ALEX

    I like this very much. I think it's great how you wrote from the child's perspective.

  • 10 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Deana,

    This had really touched my heart A LOT!

    This made me think of my cousin and how his birthday is just tomorrow and so is my boyfriends birthday, and they're both locked up on their birthday and I miss my cousin and my bf very much. But my bf is just in JDC til Wednesday so I'll be able to see him on Sat.

    Great poem. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Black Rose

    Thats good 5/5

    great point of view

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle

    5/5.. great poem. my dad is an alcoholic and use to use drugs

  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    Deana - wow - that was amazing. Made my heart skip a beat when I read it. Very sad and so perfectly written - from the eyes of an innocent, trusting, naively beautiful child. :(

    I can see why this is your favourite poem

    Hope your friend you wrote it for read it and realised what he was doing.

    Mo
    xx