Dancing Needle

by Shatter   Aug 23, 2006


Dancing needle on my skin
Let the relief settle in
Let the point penetrate deep
Let the blood start to seep
Pray to god i dont strike the wrong vein
or my life's blood will start to drain
Let the needle make its trail
Take my skin; oh so frail
watch my skin start to break
Watch the needle get what it takes
Dancing needle in my skin
I give up; I'll let you win

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  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Thankyou so much for your lovely comment. i love this poem, it made my skin crawl... your use of images is amazing... really portrays the reality of addiction. you're really good, keep writing x

  • 17 years ago

    by christine m

    CRAP, THIS ONE MADE MY SKIN CRAWL AND MY STOMACH TURN... MISSION ACCOMPLISHED... GREAT JOB! DAMN, BEING A JUNKIE ONLY A JUNKIE CAN KNOW

  • 17 years ago

    by Juanita

    Nice very nice

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