CRY after CRY

by *Wishes do come true*   Aug 31, 2006


You can never know the amount of pain I go through each day
the words, the abuse, and the loneliness that never seems to go away

cry after cry
tear after tear
why cant I die
why am I here?

I try to hide my life with just a smile
but that one smile only last a while

cry after cry
tear after tear
why cant I die
why am I here?

I ask myself this all the time
I feel like im not worth a dime

Cry after cry
Tear after tear
Why cant I die
Why am I here?

A pretty shape a pretty face
A waste of being a lost case

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  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    This poem is really good. i can relate to it. the emotion coming out of it is strong and it speaks out to me. i like it a lot. good job

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    So few words yet the feeling is so so strong, well done. i have to say, you pulled it off brilliantly!

    bravo! 5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow that's really good you have talent
    especially those

    cry after cry
    tear after tear
    why cant I die
    why am I here?

    Good job

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Great job!
    Keep up the great work.
    5/5 God Bless

    ~*tay*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow very emotional write. I loved it. Great Job!! The flow and structure were both great.

    I do believe this word, "last" should be changed to "lasts" in this line, "but that one smile only last a while" so it would read, "but that one smile only lasts a while"

    Other than that, wonderful job, I really liked it. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

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