Wow... im speechless hun... you haven't losst your gift... not even a little bit. very deep and meaningful... i don't know if this is true, but if it is: i'm really sorry hun and u can talk to me anytime. stay strong and take care,
it was so sad. Im so sorry if this is true. i would die if my best friend did.
Your write was very beautiful and moving. it was dark and deep with that sad side to it. thats the kind i like. your words and your flow were beautiful just like everypart of the poem!
So much 4 writers block women :P as always a joy to read a simple yet stunning piece... really sad 2 read though. uv used really imaginitive words to capture your feelings... luv ya work hun *hugs* I wish u didn't have 2 write from experience... xoxo
This poem really affected me so much.My daughter's best friend died in a car crash at 13 years old-I grew up with her parents and she was like a daughter to me.The pain and loss I felt and knew was twice as deep in my daughter was truly tragic.My daughter is 24 now and that still haunts her at times.I lost a best friend at 18 myself.It is hard to understand how someone so young can suddenly be gone before their time, truly sad and tragic.You have expressed this very well and it really touches the heart.Just remember the good times.Let the pain go....Memories are all we have.