Comments : The Living Nightmare

  • 11 years ago

    by The Ghost Of Tom Joad

    Excellent poem.Definatley one of my favorites on this site. Well written,keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Powerful, deep and full of emotion. I loved the ending. Great piece, which I read more than twice (I forget how many times).

  • 11 years ago

    by Fighter

    Wow... im speechless hun... you haven't losst your gift... not even a little bit. very deep and meaningful... i don't know if this is true, but if it is: i'm really sorry hun and u can talk to me anytime. stay strong and take care,
    -xXx-

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Your talent for poetry seems to grow more and more with each poem. I do hope this isn't a reflection of real life events, but if it is I'm sorry. I know how it feels.

    You always seem to amaze me. Never quit writing. You're excellent at it.

  • 11 years ago

    by forgetmenot

    This was SUCH a good poem! 5/5 deffinatly!!
    lizzie
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Omgomgomg.

    it was so sad. Im so sorry if this is true. i would die if my best friend did.
    Your write was very beautiful and moving. it was dark and deep with that sad side to it. thats the kind i like. your words and your flow were beautiful just like everypart of the poem!

    -Amberinaa*

  • 11 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    OMG! That is soo sad! I couldn't imagine anything like that happening..
    This should've been a 5/5 easy!
    *a cabillion/5*
    MandiexOx

  • 11 years ago

    by Ruthie

    So much 4 writers block women :P as always a joy to read a simple yet stunning piece... really sad 2 read though. uv used really imaginitive words to capture your feelings... luv ya work hun *hugs* I wish u didn't have 2 write from experience... xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxAngelEyes007xXx

    Wow it is so amazing i love your writting it is so good

  • 11 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    I like this poem its nice 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Brokenxx [aka Alex]

    This poem's so deep. You can tell u'v put alot of feeling into it.

  • 11 years ago

    by R......

    Best ive seen in the like 4 times ive been on here..
    publish worthy =]

  • 11 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. it's very deep. it's so small but it's strong. i can relate to this. keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Very sad, but yet heartfelt, a hearthrobbing write... loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by KB

    Wow, that was really powerful

  • 11 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This poem really affected me so much.My daughter's best friend died in a car crash at 13 years old-I grew up with her parents and she was like a daughter to me.The pain and loss I felt and knew was twice as deep in my daughter was truly tragic.My daughter is 24 now and that still haunts her at times.I lost a best friend at 18 myself.It is hard to understand how someone so young can suddenly be gone before their time, truly sad and tragic.You have expressed this very well and it really touches the heart.Just remember the good times.Let the pain go....Memories are all we have.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 10 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I ALWAYS loved your writing! Girl you got talent...it seems so effortless!! Envy will kill many admirers! You should proud of your abilities my dear!!!

    This piece...a REAL thing that many of live through. Something MANY can relate to. The key I believe is to be able to write something that will touch people and you have that!

    AWESOME!!!!! Hope to read something a little newer soon! ;)

  • 10 years ago

    by XxLonelyLovexX

    Aww really sad but really good

  • 9 years ago

    by Hopelessly Devoted to You

    Hey, awesome poem even tho its sad. I'm very sorry if this is true but ur very talented and u have a wonderful way in expressing ur emotions. This rates like 10 out of 5, excellent work

  • 9 years ago

    by Brooke Howard

    You are amazing!!
    I look up to you...neverrrrrr stop writing poems because you are fantastic!