Deaths Harmony

Creatve wise, were the same, agian i have written a whole bunch like this, and you shoul be proud, very good poem. kinda choppy flow though

Wow, amazing write. keep it up

"To late for redemption"
To = Too

First three lines should be there own stanza, in my opinion. They have this flawlessness about them. While as the rest, though still flawless, has a bit different flow/emotion to it. Not as catchy and moving, rather suttle and simple. Which is a good thing. I think if the entire poem were like the first three lines it would be too much. But it's not

Good poem, dear.

Wow. just wow. that was an amazing piece with great flow and an awesome format. i love your use of words. it makes the poem raw and powerful. 100/5 if thats possible. keep it up. ~KM~

"The final of all wine
Broken on the floor
The liquid of life
I once more, implore"

i really like that last bit.
it flows perfectly, and the rhythm of it seems perfect, like if spoken it could be put to a beat and sound just as good.

you have a great style, keep up the great work.