That was a sweet poem... i almost felt like i was the one in love [or puppy love]... it made me smile to read your poem because i was like... aww look at her, so happy and smiles alot... especially when you capitalized the "ME", it gave more impact... most parts rhymed and some dont, but its ok.. i still like you poem.. 5/5 keep writing!
Aww... I absolutely adore this poem. I went through the same thing with one of my friends.. Although I finally figured out that I didn't like him as much as he liked me and it kind of scared me... lol. Anyways.. you did an amazing job on this poem. The flow and rhythm was practically flawless and I think that you did an amazing job expressing your emotions. I can tell that you really care about this person. Hope everything works out for the best! 5/5 Take Care :)