Comments : Chaotic Mind

  • 10 years ago

    by pretending im over you

    Wow this is really good!!!! -julee*Ann

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW....I Loved this. Absolutely loved it.
    I'm going to put you on favourties,
    This was breathtaking, absolutely amazing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Great poem. love the word choice. 5/5

  • Wow, wow.... lol its absolutely marvelous.... so well written, great flow and rhythm...ur on my faves list 4 sure, ur poems are so lovely to read....

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another great poem by you, you are a great writer and i like your poetic style, so different from others, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Hey there's a girl who's coppied this! type in 'Chaotic Mind' and search and its the one above yours! i didnt know if you gave her permission, but i though id let you know

    much love
    Steph xx

  • 10 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This poem just screams out "teenage poem" to me, sorry. I didn't even notice the years/mirror issue because it flowed good enough like that, so don't worry. It was filled with over used imagery, but it was good like it was, and lets face it the rhyming wasn't forced. Just not my kind of poem, nevertheless I'm sure many other people will/have enjoy/ed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh wow. Definately a deep poem. I probably like it so much because at times in my life I feel exactly like this. But why waste time being depressed, when you could be out getting over the depression.

    The poem...The flow was excellent. I didn't think it seemed forced at all. The emotion in it was wonderful. I couldn't look away. And it left me wanting to read even more about the topic. But the last line was kind of...suicidal. I'm not so into the suicide thing, but I also do not label people. =) Great write. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Wow this poem was amazing, the flow and imagery were both perfect and theres no other words to explain it, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem brittney, great flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This was very deep. I loved the emotion and heart it portrayed. Nicely done. You have talent. 4.6/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    A penetrating scream of the insane.
    ((I love this line...))
    Cruel actions decorate her skin.
    ((And this one...This is one of the most creative ways of saying someone cuts... Nicely done.))

    I really liked this. It flowed nicely and rhymed perfectly. Great job.

    However, I have one complaint. There doesn't need to be a period at the end of every line... To make it flow even better, use commas, no punctuation, or other things.
    I know it says it doesn't allow you to do commas, but try.. It'll really help your flow. (Though, the flow isn't that bad anyways.=])

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This is another great poem. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Allison

    I love how much detail that you put into this poem. It sounds like you put a lot of work into it and it really shows. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 10 years ago

    by Mousie

    Omg that just blew my mind! i only wish i could write as good as you! you are an exceptional writer, and those lines totally rhyme! lol... definite 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Oh sorry!!! I skiped over your poem!!! Omg!! I'm soooo sorry!!!! I really liked your poem!!! 5/5 well done!!!!!
    oxoxoxoxoxoxo
    Choi!
    :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Shae

    GREAT poem!! Wow... I love the depth and the rhyming. It couldn't be any more perfect!!! Keep up the good work! 5/5

    ~Shae (Sorry your comment took so long)

  • 10 years ago

    by Rona

    Great poem! Very dark and interesting. I liked the verbal imagery in this poem. The last stanza was my favourite =)
    Great read!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    You have a serious talent. Your writing is just so descriptive. I loved reading all of your poems because they are amazing. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Excellent imagery, loving your work! I really enjoy winding my mind around your writing, sometimes I have to stop and think about it, that is great! excellent work!