This poem just screams out "teenage poem" to me, sorry. I didn't even notice the years/mirror issue because it flowed good enough like that, so don't worry. It was filled with over used imagery, but it was good like it was, and lets face it the rhyming wasn't forced. Just not my kind of poem, nevertheless I'm sure many other people will/have enjoy/ed it.
Oh wow. Definately a deep poem. I probably like it so much because at times in my life I feel exactly like this. But why waste time being depressed, when you could be out getting over the depression.
The poem...The flow was excellent. I didn't think it seemed forced at all. The emotion in it was wonderful. I couldn't look away. And it left me wanting to read even more about the topic. But the last line was kind of...suicidal. I'm not so into the suicide thing, but I also do not label people. =) Great write. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo
A penetrating scream of the insane.
((I love this line...))
Cruel actions decorate her skin.
((And this one...This is one of the most creative ways of saying someone cuts... Nicely done.))
I really liked this. It flowed nicely and rhymed perfectly. Great job.
However, I have one complaint. There doesn't need to be a period at the end of every line... To make it flow even better, use commas, no punctuation, or other things.
I know it says it doesn't allow you to do commas, but try.. It'll really help your flow. (Though, the flow isn't that bad anyways.=])