These Years

by Mel   Dec 3, 2006


Just young kids walking,
kicking up the sand.
letting the sunset sink
into our hearts and our hands
clasped together, holding on
to our dying years
and teenage fears
of growing up
and moving on
of screwing up
and getting it wrong.
Holding tight
to these times
where nothings right
but every things fine.
Where little things matter,
where hearts can shatter,
then be fixed
by a single glance
where its ok to mess up,
its called a second chance,
With friends forever
and little love notes
with laughter and smiles
and constant hopes,
Where our futures are bright
but so far away,
This time of life
is where we're grasping to stay.
Just young kids walking
watching the sun set,
thinking of these years
These years we'll never forget.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ethan

    Nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very unique style that worked very well. I enjoyed the content as well. reminds me of my younger years

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    OH MY GOSH! i love it.. it's so good! if i could i would give you more than a 5/5. it's just so true and absolutely amazing! =]] GREAT WORK!

    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    So much emotion in each word beautifuly put together i enjoyed it 5/5

    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    You are wise beyond your years my young friend. enjoy it while you can ,time flys!