Comments : Porcelain Doll

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful write! Your work is erally good!

  • 11 years ago

    by Nil

    Wow, Great job again. I love the ideas behind your poems. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ALEX

    Wow.. this is amazing. i get the feeling it's not really about a doll. i love metaphors. congrats on a wonderful poem!


  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow..
    This was beautiful.
    Really sad and heartwrenching, but a pleasure to read.
    I think you did a wonderful job on this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this poem was superb. the language you used was excellent and the ending was wonderful as well. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Nice topic. how you made the doll interwine into the poem. very clever.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so sad.
    the imagery was good.

    porcelain doll that has its wings
    that sees the sky and tries to sing
    relinquishing havoc among those that lost
    you're bound to turn into a porcelain doll...

    i just love this stanza.
    very well written
    best wishes
    and take care.

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow.. Very well written S.

    • 2 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Hehe, thank you :) I don't think I used the word "relinquishing" right, but oh well. Glad you enjoyed it!