People always tell us were not inlove when they have no idea what we feel, our parents are usually the ones who tell us this, when they should have our backs, great poem 5/5

"You say I'm to young..
but i know how i feel
And this love is real"

Oh god, i can relate to that! I've been with Marcus a year now, you think people would realise they're wasting there time huh?
Great poem, love the structure to this one!
5/5
*Gem*

"I love him and he loves me to
And that is exactly how i know it is true
You don't need proof to know that I'm in love"

This is great! I can really relate to this! It's fantastic!

This is cute! 5/5! I enjoyed reading this! Keep it up!
prepxskater

SOOOOOOOOO TRUE!!!
Omg I love it! Awsome I give you 5/5!

YES!! Exactly! You hit it right on the dot! Great poem 5/5! I loved it. Nobody is too young or too old to fall in love. When the feeling is there, you know it must be true! If there is no feeling there then it is probably not love. But as long as you can feel that undescribable feeling, you know that you're in love. It doesn't matter what anyone tells you. Let them tell you it's not true, just as long as you are in love, and that person loves you too!

sweet_rebellion

Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

You're absolutely right =D

=) well done, i know how it feels to be told your "too young to be in love" but honestly i dont think your ever too young... if there is love there is love there shouldnt be a certain age where we can start feeling things =)

well done amazing poem!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

If you're i love you're in love no one can tell you other wise because it's just not up to them. I really liked this one. i gave it a 5/5.

I thought that it was really cute, hun! Work on your grammar, though. That was the only thing...other than that, good job!

Preach it sista'!! I had a boyfriend that I KNEW I was truly in love with. We didn't work out but I will never forget him. I was forbidden to see him because my father had said "He's evil, and not the one for you....it's just puppy love" I still saw him behind his back, but after awile he couldn't take it anymore and broke up with me. If fate is for us to be together, we will meet up again in the future. Keep writing, beautiful job!

sweet_rebellion

I like the last stanza it sums up the story of the poem :) Flow was smooth, good job

You have some errors.

you (cant) change my mind
= Can't

And don't forget to capitalize the I's =)
^^ Some people give '4' even though the poem is good if you forgot to capitalize the I's.

Awww short yet sweet and simple.
i can totally relate.
great write hunnn =]]

Ahh something so pure and sweet. Also, showing with your confidence here, I like it in poem when writer shows off her own additude. The theme of this poem problebly touches everyone who been or are in love, so that is important too. And you have to fight for what u believe in! :)
Amazing work on this, really cute poem, easy to read.
5/5 Keep up!

Great
love it x