You dont either- shorty. no just kidding

Hey! I love this poem reading it makes me think of someone I know. I really like him and I know that he likes me... but it's never going to happen...and that fact is killing me. But anyway I do love this poem and a lot of your other one! keep it up and thank you for commenting! buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Its a nice poem...
ur very lucky to find the right one :)

xx rob

This made me think of one of my guy friends. The part about how his hair sticks straight up. My friend hates that.. but i think it's super cute. He makes faces when i tell him that.. Anyways, it seemed like the poem wasn't ready to end. But it was really good anyways. Congrats!!

Parker

Use more of a strong vocabulary into your poems it just really brings the poem together. Use your periods and commas I saw places that needed those. Other then that it was very nice poem. Not really something great or to what I usually read. But I'll give you a 5. God Bless

~Tay

Beautiful poem again, really just a great job, you have definite talent! 5/5

Hey i really like this poem it works for my boyfriend too lol awesom poem Mandz

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
this poem was so adorable! i wish i had a man =(
but your poem seems like it stopped short. i was like, what happened to the rest of it?
great job, your so damn lucky!
5/5

The first few lines made me giggle. You are a talented writer. and an amazing rhymer. Very good emotion in this one. Loved it! I really love this part the best:

I love the way your hair sticks up
After you run your fingers through it

hehe..

Amazing job!!!!

5/5

What a sweet dedication to the one you love!

Awwwwww very good poem! i love it..its so sweet.

your a great writer..good job!

I like this ...my fav. was "I love the look you give me
If I do something blonde"

Excellent job 5/5! and thanks for the comments!

Now..Now this is an excellent poem with great emotion in it n how u describe it, 5/5

Aw.. this is soo cute.. i love it! its great you have someone so perfect!

Aw, how cute. Well put together, and it had a nice flow. Good job.

Such a sweet poem, keep up the good work!

Awww verry gorgous! your bf is lucky! When i read it, i can sort of feel your fealings for him! Very good job! Awsome poem!
love mel

Awwwh this was so0o sweet!
It made me smile while I was reading it.
I thought it flowed very well, you did an excellent job with this.

Wow. this poem was great. its so cute. i have a poem like this well about my boyfriend anyway. i find it funny how much of an impact they have on our lives. anywhoooo not that you care. but you did a great job. keep it up.

Everyone has a flaw...haha...