This is soo sad.. i really hope its not true.. anyway i really like it.. it wasnt going where i expected... i love how in the end you want to die not to just be rid of the pain but so you dont have to lies to friends its a really great end..
Wow... This was really intense and sad...But I loved reading it...I just hope it's not real...But I give this a 5/5 because of the rhythm and the flow was wonderful...keep on writing and be strong... ^_^
I like this one, I am glad I picked it. Very dark and deep, such sadness behind it. I really like the title as well and the way you used it through the poem. You did a good job with this piece. Nice work.