Comments : Finish Me Off

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelly

    Wow pretty intense. Lots of anger there, wicked write.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by She Is My Rain

    I ove this poem..this is like one of my favorites. Keep doing great, I love all of your poems.
    -Koi =)

  • 12 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This is soo sad.. i really hope its not true.. anyway i really like it.. it wasnt going where i expected... i love how in the end you want to die not to just be rid of the pain but so you dont have to lies to friends its a really great end..

  • 12 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Aww this is so sad. I loved this poem along with al your other poems. You definately know how to write.5/5 keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    You are a talented writer.. as just so you know I hope you never stop writing!! And I love it.. you're so deep into a poem.. it feel realistic. i love that.. good job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Hope its not from experience , as it is so realistic, another great poem

  • 11 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    Wow... This was really intense and sad...But I loved reading it...I just hope it's not real...But I give this a 5/5 because of the rhythm and the flow was wonderful...keep on writing and be strong... ^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Spirit

    Wow
    sorry but it is all that i can say
    wow
    :~)Sam

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great poem! The flow was amazing, the concept was so deep, and the way it was written worked so well! Truly one of the best poems I've read... Simply because of the emotion you've shown! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    One word. Amazing. I read this like ten times because it's so good.

    P.S - I really hope this isn't happening to you. If it is feel free to talk to me.

    <3 Bethany

  • 11 years ago

    by Paralyzed

    I like this one, I am glad I picked it. Very dark and deep, such sadness behind it. I really like the title as well and the way you used it through the poem. You did a good job with this piece. Nice work.