Comments : If I Could

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Awwww Cindy, this is very beautiful. I like your nice love poems. Slightly poignant, but sweet at the same time.
    Great job, good flow and vivid imagery. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Yes very vivid imagery! Beautiful poem for a deserving husband. I wish we could turn back time too........5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Freddie

    I agree! that was great!!! Keep writing u rok!

  • 11 years ago

    by emad

    Very nice sad poem but may i say there is no life without death sorry it's life law sorry again

  • 11 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Thanks for the compliment. It means a lot. And you have some very beautiful here. This one expresses a lot. Thanks again and I hope we stay in touch.

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I love how you started each stanza with 'If I could turn back time'. Brought something extra into the poem. I, too wish that we could turn back time. =[ Fantastic poem that you have written here, keep it up! 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwww how sweet. i love it!! excellent job.keep writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    If I could turn back time
    I would capture the image of your face
    The sparkle in your eyes, the dimple in your chin
    The way each and every freckle had it's place.

    I really loved this stanza..for some reason, really. It touched me.
    Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is another very good poem, great job cynthia, loved the flow, 5/5!!! keep up the good poems!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Farukh

    Just GREAT!!!!!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by john graver

    You can feel the love,longing and devotion pouring from every word. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    This is truly beatufull! it was wonderfully described! and excellent flow! i love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rona

    This is a very lovely poem. This poem reminded me of a book I have read before called; P.S. I Love You. (I forgot who the author was)...
    I just wanna say I hope the New Year brings you more joy and love.
    Happy New Year =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet another wonderful write. I loved it. The imagery was outstanding in this poem. The flow as well as the structure was good as well. Keep on writting, you are very talented.

    Peace, Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Beautiful cindty. just fabulous. i loved it, and it reminded me of my poem, a time machine.

    error: listion-LISTEN.

    hmm."do you ever have that feeling where you want to turn back time."

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautiful...breathtaking imagery.
    I thought this flowed very well, and I enjoyed the wording muchly.

  • 11 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This is such a greatpoem.. its so descriptive and really shows a strong emotion... i love how every stanza begins with the same line.. its adds a nice touch.. however.. some lines are really long and disrupt the flow of the poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    I wish i could turn back time sometimes, even if it is just to erase the bad times or even take back something i've said, but most of all i would love to turn back time if it meant one more hug..
    Excellent poem hun, you've really touched my heart with this one.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mariana Kabbout

    Nobody can turn the time , my dear Cindy ... Be strong! The life is going on !
    I wish u the best !


  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah

    Cindy this is a wonderful poem
    extremely heart rending
    5/5 take care xx