I love how you started each stanza with 'If I could turn back time'. Brought something extra into the poem. I, too wish that we could turn back time. =[ Fantastic poem that you have written here, keep it up! 5/5
This is a very lovely poem. This poem reminded me of a book I have read before called; P.S. I Love You. (I forgot who the author was)...
I just wanna say I hope the New Year brings you more joy and love.
Happy New Year =)
This is such a greatpoem.. its so descriptive and really shows a strong emotion... i love how every stanza begins with the same line.. its adds a nice touch.. however.. some lines are really long and disrupt the flow of the poem
I wish i could turn back time sometimes, even if it is just to erase the bad times or even take back something i've said, but most of all i would love to turn back time if it meant one more hug..
Excellent poem hun, you've really touched my heart with this one.