She's Back

by Josh   Jan 7, 2007


The one and only joy of my life is my girl
if there is so many other fish in the ocean this girl is my pearl
because shes different than every girl I've ever met
an angel above the world who's beauty shes kept

through the years, tears and fears we've faced
as death nears our peers have helped us replace
our frowns with smiles, separated by miles
but one day out of nowhere again my number she dials

shes shown me the way today away from pain
may i say never go away and let that pain remain
memories remain, kissing you playing in the rain
only you, my love, knows how to keep my brain sane

thoughts and pictures kept me hoping and wishing
one day my love and i will be back together kissing
feeling that feeling of being higher than the ceiling
my hearts been leaning meaning for us to start healing

***I just wanted to get feedback. I'm currently finishing this poem and wanted to know what everyone thought...

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  • 11 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I really liked it! it's so full of emotion and everything, and i think it was really sweet. i think it's a great start, have fun finishing it:) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

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  • 11 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Very good poem. I reli liked dis poem becuz it was full of emotional love and feelings. Wishing u good luck finishing it.