I've read a few of ur poems n they're amazing, i particularly like this one tho,
especially the lines

This story was never meant to have a happy end
It's too broken and tattered now far beyond mend

that is so deep, almost profound.

I have missed your poems hunni, but this was def worth the waiting, this was so amazing, kinda the thoughts I have about my BF some times......Thanks for sharing hun, I hope that you are okay, I love you and I am always here for you, remember that okay =0)

Love Sabrina

Beautiful...

Loved this one

I like this poem alot. I know how you feel. I dated a guy for almost 2 years and now I wish that I never met him because he took so many things from me then he shattered my heart. Great poem. I really really liked it. 5/5 for sure. Great job!!
Crystal

Some people are givers and others are more than willing to take without giving it a second thought. Unfortunately those with kind hearts are unable to recognize them. Nicely penned poem....I can feel the heartache coming through in your words. Time will heal and true love will shine!

So true good work x

+.+ Sad, you realised to late. A loved the flow, sometimes it seemed like it wasn't going to fit but it did :) +.+

What a excellent poem. Your pain can be felt through the words u have written. To many times those with kind hearts are done this way. I hope things are getting better take Care Cindy

This is very touching, ive been there myself and this peom is the perfect way to let them know how you feel, keep up the excellent work ^-^!

Excellent poem! I can relate, I feel like that sometimes.

I love it very powerful, strong wording, sum of your lines diddn't flow very well but still great job

This is the same poem i have ever read and i have been through the same... i can relate to what u are feeling.

Breathless ... thts one of the best poems ive ever read its one of them where u wish u wrote it lol it was typed perfectly there nomore anyone could do to make tht better amazing poem 5/5

That was hot i can diffenitly relate to you

Hey ur poem is rlly great... wud u mind commenting on mi writtin pieces just search for the author 'beautifulxhate' i got a fair few hope u like

Thts great desired love poem. you really love someone alot
just like me.
good carry on