To you

by beav   Jan 20, 2007


I'm baring my soul now for all here to see.
in a true poet's words -judge tenderly of me.
i know no one here and i think that is best.
unbiased crits, encouragement be this poets request.
your words and your rhymes i am longing to read,
to inspire another- a good poets deed.
i'll delve into your world and you'll delve into mine to learn of each other by word and by line.
for reading i thank you- please take what you will.
for writing thanks, too- let you hand not be still.

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  • 10 years ago

    by lisa

    Im putting you on my faves!!your work is amazing and i think i could learn alot from you xwell done 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Theres already a < beav> on that other site she good too, how about
    < JENNIFER> i like that name . its proably taken too o well cy

  • 10 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good poem i love reading your work i'm putting you on my favs and thanks for your comments

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really loved the poem and how it was written, the message is wonderful and I completely agree, amazing job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Psycho93

    Nice written thanx for your suggestions!!!