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by firexdancer Jan 26, 2007
Dark, fantasy /
The pain, it hurts, I dont know why
The butterflies fly free and not I
I'm forced to live with shackled feet,
My wings you break, my back you beat,
The colors gone, the fires die
Nothing stands still except the sky
The black earth boils, fire running red
But I still stand here, mind numb with dread
Fire burns my feet, it does not lie
Tears cannot flow from my eyes
I try to run, I scream in pain
Trying to fight the ropes in vain
Thorns dig into flesh, slicing my thigh
Oh why can I not say goodbye?
These wings that were as white as snow
Stained by sin, ripped by things not known
My legs are broken, my throat is dry
A broken body wishing to die
The flames consume, a being is pure
A child forgiven, she found the cure.The pain, its gone, into the sky
The butterflies fly free and so do I
Wings pure white, I do not miss
That life I led, for I got my wish.
please post comments!
Great poem, wording is superb. Rhyming is unusual and poem is very unique. You can describe your emotions amazingly. Well done, another 5/5.
Now this, was excellent. Your poems are much stronger when they follow an proper structure. I liked this a lot. The flow was spot on, and the rhyming was wonderful. It was excellent.
Keep it up.
Wow. this is deep. it really is. i like the flow. it made it more interesting to read. keep up the good work
just wanted to say thanks for commenting my poems..i just wanted to say that i loved this poem it was really well written and i just wanted to say keep up the good work...love ya..
by lost in lovee
Wow!! this poem was sooo nice! written very well great flow and good rhyming! 5/5